2/08/2019

Love this one ... beautiful ... simple ... speaks to me ...

kind of you to say, I truly appreciate it <3
(& thank you for the RL entry)

thank you Barona ^-^

It he returns such a gift,he's nuts.

thank you sir ^-^
(you've made me smile)

I love how it begins as a whisper. The brackets are the real star of this piece.

The impressions I got from the flowers were almost an innocent image of falling petals. A very loving image to intertwine into your words.

The ending is perfectly poised. Poised being a good word for the piece as a whole.

A lot communicated in this poem. Thank you for sharing.

-M

what a wonderful comment! ^-^

I tend to just pour out what I'm feeling into my writing (..makes it hard for me to view it objectively) -- so it's really awesome to see a nuanced and thoughtful interpretation such as yours

..totally agree about the innocence, and I'm happy you like the bracket part so much! xD (certainly makes me value it more)

Thank you :)

Brava Umm! Some beautiful words to ponder.  There is great power in simplicity.

..pleased you like this one ^~^  
& thankful for the kind comment <3

Love the lines. Makes my mind spin on the true meaning. Though the mystery is part of the beauty of this piece.

Thank you! ..& I love that you find beauty in the mystery here ^-^

a stunning short spill! So much said in so few words👏👏 loved this!

(stunning?!) Eeeep! XD
Thank you for the gracious compliment Hunterapsych ^-^

Thank you Ultra! 😊
(stoked that you like it, and grateful for the kind comment ^-^)

Cute

Great poem

Thank you! ^~^

Hullo, beautiful  

so much to like here, not least the picturegraph.  Title, quote and note all carry a significance which works well In tandom with the more metaphorically leaning body. a clever few lines which connect everything together in a most finese-filled manner. And  there, amid the violence,  I found some solace this poem was written in present tense and not past  


remarkable write  

*hat tip*  

Playful, beautiful, and absolutely wonderful :)

thank you sir ^~^

couldn't agree more! ^-^
& thank you for the kind comment Danny :)

simple and sweet
beautifully written  

..incredibly sweet of you to say
(thank you! ^~^)

Lovely write ... Bless and love ..

Thank you FeNyx :3
(you're very kind)

that's kinda what it's supposed to be! xD (thank you for getting this, and for studying it) -- will have to add quotation marks  

appreciate the kind feedback, ...& nudge in the right direction :]

yea, apologies for it taking so long for me to reply. Hope it's a bit less enigmatic now  

& thanks again! ^-^

Nice

thank you! ^-^

This poem is beautiful in it's brevity, simplicity and diction! I love every about it? Bravo! Well done!

Sorry so late on this i just read it wow your an amazing writer

The simplicity, god I love it. What a beautiful shorty❤️

Great poem Umm.

So short, but filled with images I fell into

inspired my next poem

Sometimes we lunge out for something or someone we grab hold tight for a while, and then something in us changes.

I have my moments :)

I love this one, it speaks to me

[You've never woke all hungover, .. and had chew your arm off, .. coz some batshit crazy lady is sleeping on it ? ]

I do enjoy your writing  [Umm],  .. sweet imagery

hear
https://youtu.be/UDGJGSc_iLE

This makes me think of woman who wants to have her cake and eat it too.
She likes to be a good girl but now and again likes to tap into her naughtier side too.
Then it may just be my imagination running away with me again.

don't know why but this felt so dark. beautifully dark.

From the earth we came, and thus we must return.
Reunited with the sprit to which life is no concern.

Xxx

Thanks for reposting this. Great! Hugs and love, Ora