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Memories Stir
A blanket of dust
now covers our picture.
Soft earth that was once your skin,
is now dusted with snow.
This sheet had layered
over months without warmth.
But we are soon
to hold each other again.
Then Spring bed will be dawned upon,
and rains of April;
shower mud off of your
brilliant reflection.
Summer may bore
our new year,
to melt mountain’s
ice covers.
now covers our picture.
Soft earth that was once your skin,
is now dusted with snow.
This sheet had layered
over months without warmth.
But we are soon
to hold each other again.
Then Spring bed will be dawned upon,
and rains of April;
shower mud off of your
brilliant reflection.
Summer may bore
our new year,
to melt mountain’s
ice covers.
Published 8th Feb 2019
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8th Feb 2019 3:20pm
HI Daniel Long , love your work its on poem on love that their picture covers a blanket of dust which means its not been seen since many days. Smiley of her skin to soft earth which is now dusted with snow ,this sheet refers to him & his love which is layered without warmth, but soon they are to meet and hold each other again , just like spring bed and rains of April which is a smiley of their love will take the mud off her brilliant reflection, summer may bore their new year to melt ice covers which means summer will melt ice covers for their love . Its a brilliant poem written where love and seasons in nature have been compared just like seasons in nature where we have cold winters we have cold times in love . Just like nature summer , spring , rainy seasons follow after hard times good time will come in love too.
8th Feb 2019 3:58pm
Aradhya, your analysis of the poem was spot on you proven yourself o be truly a poet! I'm flattered and this has emboldened me to write more about this past flame of mine. Thank you Aradhya!
8th Feb 2019 4:10pm
Hi Daniel you deserve the praise for your work expect much more from you take care God bless you .
