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Like Snow
you traced me
intertwining
delicately holding
as we fell
dainty body
pure and white
under yours
falling lightly
like snow
intertwining
delicately holding
as we fell
dainty body
pure and white
under yours
falling lightly
like snow
Published 5th Feb 2019
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5th Feb 2019 6:02pm
Fairy
Beautifully written with a graceful almost fragile air to it. Your words capture love and snow flakes eloquently!
As always, Post
Beautifully written with a graceful almost fragile air to it. Your words capture love and snow flakes eloquently!
As always, Post
6th Feb 2019 10:33pm
post, thank you so much, I was hoping to capture a delicate and feathery atmosphere.
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