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Swathed In Darkness
When swathed in darkness you and I explore,
If I'm invited in; you afford joy
Through loss of senses: sight: velvet reward
Lies behind blindfolds; touch: cuffs you deploy
Around my dark, cool wrists; freedom: adjust
The collar with your leash; I'll follow on
Through crooked corridors, scented with musk;
I'll know the feel of you before I long
To sweep my tongue at just the steady pace
You set while marching me forward to this,
Your bedchamber; I'm bound to find my place
Prescribed, because it is the nemesis
Of fear; anxieties fade in excess
As I explore your taste: swathed in darkness.
If I'm invited in; you afford joy
Through loss of senses: sight: velvet reward
Lies behind blindfolds; touch: cuffs you deploy
Around my dark, cool wrists; freedom: adjust
The collar with your leash; I'll follow on
Through crooked corridors, scented with musk;
I'll know the feel of you before I long
To sweep my tongue at just the steady pace
You set while marching me forward to this,
Your bedchamber; I'm bound to find my place
Prescribed, because it is the nemesis
Of fear; anxieties fade in excess
As I explore your taste: swathed in darkness.
Published 3rd Feb 2019
| Edited 4th Feb 2019
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3rd Feb 2019 2:36pm
3rd Feb 2019 3:14pm
The fear disappears as the trust becomes all encompassing if things are done correctly - which is rare
3rd Feb 2019 3:02pm
A beautiful, unbridled execution of tantalizing words. Nice to see the "swathes of darkness" fully employed.
My favourite part:
"Through crooked corridors, scented with musk;
I'll know the taste of you before I long
To sweep my tongue at just the steady pace
You set while marching me forward to this,"
My favourite part:
"Through crooked corridors, scented with musk;
I'll know the taste of you before I long
To sweep my tongue at just the steady pace
You set while marching me forward to this,"
I'm especially glad you enjoyed this in view of our dialogue the other day - smiles
3rd Feb 2019 4:36pm
That dialogue was clearly in mind when I saw the title. I knew in one click it would rouse me.
4th Feb 2019 8:46am
4th Feb 2019 00:27am
Still deeply sensual even with the blindfold. That can actually enhance the experience. Wonderful job, SweetOblivion.
4th Feb 2019 8:45am
4th Feb 2019 8:45am
right there you place the reader..
full of extra-sensory vibes....
captivating...
full of extra-sensory vibes....
captivating...
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