Sapiosexual Lust

yes in a way it bad as a
but temporally we are on a high hormones flow hearts beat fast mind lets go as we become the one in the write

nice work

I'm focusing more so on a deep bond between two people only, but I totally agree with you on the flow. Thanks buddy;)

Thank you the kind words, Bender. Appreciate it;)

Nice use of the acrostic form in this.  The message, quite clear.  And clearly, some of us just can't get enough.  Yes, now I do have that Depeche Mode song in my head.  

Heehee, what song is that? You know my convictions on it, being there a time or three.🙄 It was weighing on my mind and I wanted to do my first acrostic so tada. I just hate seeing people get hurt is all.

Oh, I agree with you that it's a human need. I know it can be much deeper and more intense than an "in person experience".  I don't think it's healthy though.

No. I got frustrated trying to fix it and gave up, it was all jacked up. If I make the slightest edit anymore, it throws all lines out of place and it's hard to align them again. It's weird and I don't get it, I need to contact admin.

Exactly. Once I fix the space, though, it can cause that line to then mix with the one above it. I like my stuff centered too and it even causing that to be misaligned in the end. I just need to quit impulse posting and that'll solve the issue. Lol

It is a mystical truth that bears heavy consequences. But the mind, soul and heart have no control of it. It depends on the chemical sphere. We are just dust carried by the wind. Beautiful ink. J

Thank you,  I do have control over it though. The temporary fun is not worth the crash at any cost

Learnt a new word...thanks...

That's lust itself. Lol

Beautifully pinned and visually beautiful as well.

Thank you so much, it was my first acrostic piece. The message was weighing heavy on my mind and it was fun. Thank you that add as well.;)

Echo Juvenalis66. So easy to trap someone with seductive lines without the moderating influence of face to face truth.

Yep and even when it's an  unintentional seduction , it's best to just let it stop before it even starts.

I agree with your above reply.  This difficulty applies to collaborations, which can be touch-and-go.  I wouldn't worry too much about the edit throwing things off here.  It's clearly fine work.

Thank you for the reassurance, crowfly. I finally got it somewhat proper.  

Wonderfully expressive acrostic, Pandora! Although the formatting is a bit messed up, I can envision what you intended it to look like, and you did a great job.

Here is my suggestion to fix the formatting...

1) Edit the poem and set the cursor to the beginning of the last line
2) Hit backspace (probably 10 or more times), until there is only one space between the last word of that line and the beginning of the one before it.
3) Then press enter to make the last line go back down a row where it's supposed to be.
4) Move up to the next line and repeat this process until you get to the beginning.

I've dealt with this same issue. Trying to edit a poem which is already formatted and centered by the website can screw up the structure of the poem sometimes.

Orrrr... you could just edit the poem, erase all of the text, and paste the poem back in the correctly formatted way.
I've saved you some trouble by correcting the format for you... hope that helps!

[b]W[/b]e share a love of words and ink; friends
[b]O[/b]f the pen. We write out thoughts; our
[b]R[/b]eality, provoking emotions; even
[b]D[/b]reams of bliss. Awakened, your
[b]L[/b]onely heart fades. You crave them
[b]U[/b]nder your sheets; touch, kiss and love.
[b]S[/b]pecial; you feel. An invitation of
[b]T[/b]orment, though, have you invited to life.
[b]T[/b]roubled and destraut, you'll be; a new
[b]R[/b]eality. You'll be left just as lonely
[b]A[/b]s before; it's a temporary fix for the
[b]P[/b]layers of the pen and badly, it ends                                                

Thank you!! It's most appreciated. I know the tinkering process but it still gets taxing and crimson gave me the genius idea of editing outside of here and repasting but I've yet to do it, writing other stuff. Duh!!🙄

Great write. I know the structure isn't what you were aiming for but I think it works nicely as is.

My freaking apologies...just now seeing this while another user comment. Sorry & thank you. Miss those damn writes of yours....come back soon pleeeease!!

Thank you so much ☺