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Idolic
Constantly you underestimate each hardship,
preferring generous supplication.
None enjoyed despite entreatment tailored deleteriously youward.
Despise earthside entities, seductive emptiness.
Share enjoyment towards sacred divinity.
Your rough humanity yielding godlike essence.
preferring generous supplication.
None enjoyed despite entreatment tailored deleteriously youward.
Despise earthside entities, seductive emptiness.
Share enjoyment towards sacred divinity.
Your rough humanity yielding godlike essence.
Published 1st Feb 2019
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1st Feb 2019 5:50pm
Hi Virgil, welcome to DU!
I really enjoyed your vocabulary and the alliteration here, but I'm having trouble figuring out the meaning of your poem. I'll give you a more in-depth review when I have the time :)
I really enjoyed your vocabulary and the alliteration here, but I'm having trouble figuring out the meaning of your poem. I'll give you a more in-depth review when I have the time :)
1st Feb 2019 5:52pm
Very intriguing spill, for me.
I'm gonna have to reread a couple of times and come back to this.
Also, interesting the usage of the Greek word, Youward, now found in the King James Version translations.
You caused me to spend time on this word and so, i thank You.
welcome to the Deep
I'm gonna have to reread a couple of times and come back to this.
Also, interesting the usage of the Greek word, Youward, now found in the King James Version translations.
You caused me to spend time on this word and so, i thank You.
welcome to the Deep
