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Ablaze
The sun is peering through my window
heating up all the little inside
blessed bliss of ardent
simmer with simple thoughts of you
I smile along with the sunlight
both lovingly ablaze
swept up in knowing beauty
as you settle in our gaze
I wander within the breezes
cascading thru those lovely locks
capturing your attention
as softly my heartbeat talks
rhythmic movements flutter
drifting slowly near your sway
settled closely with the foresight
lingeing moments are here to stay
Published 30th Jan 2019
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30th Jan 2019 7:34pm
Such a warm lovely write.
Caused visions of a woman in a sundress.
I could use a little warmth right now. My condo pipes are frozen solid.
Thanks. I needed this.
Caused visions of a woman in a sundress.
I could use a little warmth right now. My condo pipes are frozen solid.
Thanks. I needed this.
30th Jan 2019 7:37pm
Thanks Snug, dang that sux...I just had to cook something in the oven to warm this place up.
30th Jan 2019 9:35pm
Such tenderness here, and so well written. I'm glad those moments don't drift away.
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30th Jan 2019 10:12pm
Wonderfully written piece JusTim!
Enjoyed reading this warm and lovely spill excellent👏👏
Enjoyed reading this warm and lovely spill excellent👏👏
30th Jan 2019 10:14pm
30th Jan 2019 10:20pm
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30th Jan 2019 10:55pm
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30th Jan 2019 11:59pm
Anonymous
31st Jan 2019 4:42am
RomanTim,
Very nice, my friend. Really beautiful writing. Keeping warm during this cold snap, I see.
Good job.
MZ.
Very nice, my friend. Really beautiful writing. Keeping warm during this cold snap, I see.
Good job.
MZ.
31st Jan 2019 12:27pm
Thanks Matthew. It might get up to 0 by the time I get out of work but then it's supposed to snow lol
Hey did you come home with any shirts left from the casino?
Hey did you come home with any shirts left from the casino?
Anonymous
31st Jan 2019 5:31pm
Hey Buddy,
Preface: You know I kid with you a lot, but you're a good guy(don't tell anyone I said that though, you'll get a big head).
It's 369 degrees below here, so it's not too bad.
I actually did not get to the casino last night! First Wednesday in a while. I went outside and my hair froze up solid(and it was already a bad enough hair day, so my casino advisors thought it would be best to cancel). Ugh, winter!
Preface: You know I kid with you a lot, but you're a good guy(don't tell anyone I said that though, you'll get a big head).
It's 369 degrees below here, so it's not too bad.
I actually did not get to the casino last night! First Wednesday in a while. I went outside and my hair froze up solid(and it was already a bad enough hair day, so my casino advisors thought it would be best to cancel). Ugh, winter!
31st Jan 2019 6:51pm
Anonymous
31st Jan 2019 7:50pm
You have a way of connecting your love and passion to nature that just soothes the senses. A warm blanket for your love to snuggle under
31st Jan 2019 11:45pm
