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My Moon
My mind wraps the moon
in many different colors
seeking only you
—the one
pure gravity implored
as waves crash upon the shore
you pull me in
you push me out
but still here I am
with you, without
in many different colors
seeking only you
—the one
pure gravity implored
as waves crash upon the shore
you pull me in
you push me out
but still here I am
with you, without
Published 29th Jan 2019
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2019 5:46pm
Love how you pulled tidal motion into this with the moon. Always your romantic catches the little beautiful details. Love's got you by the toes, doesn't it, my friend? :-)
29th Jan 2019 5:48pm
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2019 8:12pm
Hey Tim,
Very nice, my friend.
(I was a little scared after reading the title, due to your consistent lack of pants on your avatars), but it all turned out good. lol.
Excellent.
MZ.
Very nice, my friend.
(I was a little scared after reading the title, due to your consistent lack of pants on your avatars), but it all turned out good. lol.
Excellent.
MZ.
29th Jan 2019 8:16pm
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30th Jan 2019 1:19am
The moon does have its influence. It inspired you in these fine lines. Excellent!
30th Jan 2019 1:22am
