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Until I Find You Waiting
Tell me all the places I can find
The dappled shadows of you
That show me everywhere the sun goes
Where your warmth is while I live.
I know there will be other moments
In dreams where I’m wide awake
And yet only exist in dreamscapes,
Because that is where we’ve lived.
The river’s yearn and pull to the gulf,
Our currents, when strength is spent,
All conjoined in a vortex of mirth
Felt so clearly from my mouth.
That will assure us without pledges,
Totems of your abundance,
Reading a deep night’s constellations,
Until I find you waiting.
#MayaAngelou
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 28th Jan 2019
Author's Note
•Inspired by Maya Angelou’s poem “Refusal”.
•Entered in the Deep competition “Why the Caged Bird Sings”, hosted by Ahavati with co-host JohnnyBlaze.
•Entered in the Deep competition “Why the Caged Bird Sings”, hosted by Ahavati with co-host JohnnyBlaze.
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Re. Until I Find You Waiting
Anonymous
28th Jan 2019 11:32pm
Jadey,
That is so beautiful. It's soooo peacefully, romantically written.
Gorgeous, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
That is so beautiful. It's soooo peacefully, romantically written.
Gorgeous, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.

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28th Jan 2019 11:39pm
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2019 11:40pm
Much deserved, Jadey. You often create gorgeous visions with words, and I'm grateful for that.
Love,
Matthew.
Love,
Matthew.

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Re. Until I Find You Waiting
28th Jan 2019 11:56pm
Very elegant romantic tranquil imagery Priestess. I marvel at your ink for its depth and flowing imagery throughout from start to finish.😁
Each read brings a a deeper meaning than the one before. You are the true one and only Priestess of this realm and plateau.🌹
🐺Priest
Each read brings a a deeper meaning than the one before. You are the true one and only Priestess of this realm and plateau.🌹
🐺Priest
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Gracious & grateful thanks, dear Priest, while this one graceful bows from your words, and the RL honors.
Re. Until I Find You Waiting
29th Jan 2019 1:41am
This is beautiful, it has a sublime quality, very much Maya Angelou with its undertones of deep emotion..
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29th Jan 2019 2:15am
Thank you so very much for the honor of your feel for my humble tribute, and adding it to your Reading List. Especially since I felt so comfortable with Maya’s work soon after I first discovered her remarkable poems and quotes! In fact, one of my favorite Angelou quotations is:
“I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.”
“I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.”
Re. Until I Find You Waiting
29th Jan 2019 4:08am
the mystical magnetic pull ..this path of love ..woven in the truth of elemental forces & the sublime dreamy fabric that souls in yearn embrace... beautifully deeply felt..best for the comp dear Poetess!
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29th Jan 2019 5:25am
Thank you, dearest Uma. Your spiritual & insightful connections, when you comment, are beautiful to witness. I’m so honored by your visits, and support.
Re. Until I Find You Waiting
29th Jan 2019 1:00pm
Wonderful entry, Jade. It encapsulates Angelo perfectly.
Best of luck in the comp.
Best of luck in the comp.
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30th Jan 2019 12:47pm
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30th Jan 2019 6:44pm
Thank you dearest, I’m honored for your love & appreciation. 💋
I hope this poem gives you some peace within.
I hope this poem gives you some peace within.
Re. Until I Find You Waiting
1st Feb 2019 9:00am
This is so beautiful...
I felt the words as whispers of a lover not wanting to break the silence. A wonderful write. :)
- tpd
I felt the words as whispers of a lover not wanting to break the silence. A wonderful write. :)
- tpd
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Re: Re. Until I Find You Waiting
1st Feb 2019 10:20am
Thank you, dear sister, for your words of tender mercy on my ode to Maya.
~Jade x
~Jade x
Re. Until I Find You Waiting
6th Feb 2019 6:22am
“Dappled shadows” — wish I thought of it. Your ability to pick unusual imagery that rocks the reader’s world is second to none. The third stanza was my favorite— so powerful. Thank you for continuing to raise the bar for the rest of us. Amazing tribute
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6th Feb 2019 7:57pm