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Beyond Control
I am weak,
succumbed to forces
beyond my control
I have fallen,
a romantic sensibility
bespeaks my soul
open hearts bleed
inking, undying attention
amid amatory intrigue
tiny fires crave
heated fingers curve
across boundries
here only love can believe
succumbed to forces
beyond my control
I have fallen,
a romantic sensibility
bespeaks my soul
open hearts bleed
inking, undying attention
amid amatory intrigue
tiny fires crave
heated fingers curve
across boundries
here only love can believe
Published 25th Jan 2019
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25th Jan 2019 5:55pm
dearest Tim your romantic heart is a thing of great beauty
your passions a great beacon don't ever change...
beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
your passions a great beacon don't ever change...
beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
25th Jan 2019 10:33pm
Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 8:14pm
Tim,
You romantic devil.
Always a pleasure to read of your happiness, while we wallow in horrific misery, and loneliness. Kidding.
Nice writing, my friend.
MZ.
You romantic devil.
Always a pleasure to read of your happiness, while we wallow in horrific misery, and loneliness. Kidding.
Nice writing, my friend.
MZ.
25th Jan 2019 10:34pm
Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 10:41pm
LOL!
25th Jan 2019 8:26pm
25th Jan 2019 10:36pm
25th Jan 2019 11:40pm
Your romantic sensibility is the foundation for a wonderful love poem. Fine job!
25th Jan 2019 11:44pm
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26th Jan 2019 2:54pm
Anonymous
28th Jan 2019 4:25pm
Intriguing...never surface imagery with your poetry. Always a bit more than expected. :-)
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