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Traveling North
Tender are his kisses that begin with her pretty pink toes and travel both roads towards his destination; slow and steady. Beneath the lash of his tongue; lavished becomes of her flesh now aglow. Gently, he renders nibbles to her supple thighs; flesh slightly gathering between his teeth. In the glimmer of every giggle on the verge of a laugh and within each promise of a sigh; such was welcoming music to his ears. In the midst of sweetened noise from parted lips, her wafting fragrance fills his nostrils as it whispers....
.... Welcome Home.
.... Welcome Home.
Published 24th Jan 2019
| Edited 2nd Apr 2019
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24th Jan 2019 4:21am
Lovely way of mapping out such an intimate adventure. You never disappoint.
24th Jan 2019 4:28am
It was a splendid adventure. Really cranked the heat with "the sweet noise of her parted lips".
24th Jan 2019 4:27am
24th Jan 2019 4:45am
Thank you, Lawrence. I'm tickled pink that you liked and added it!! Traveling South may just be my next destination of words;)
24th Jan 2019 5:03am
24th Jan 2019 6:27am
Echo Tenderloin and BCpoet. I suspected from title it would be about kissing upwards on the body (we hear much more about ;going south'). Favourite line:
he wafting fragrance that fills his nostrils, whispers; welcome home.
he wafting fragrance that fills his nostrils, whispers; welcome home.
24th Jan 2019 6:00pm
Thank you, Solomon. I'm horrible at name titles. Lol. I'm glad you liked the ending!!
24th Jan 2019 9:14pm
24th Jan 2019 9:38pm
8th Jun 2022 1:32am
Settle yet unique coming close to a laugh could be possible then you see it. I think a smile is a great way to start the day simple occasion such as these deserves a great write.
