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Suggestive
These whispered enchantments
do little to quell the throbbing
pressed against the cotton
of my captivity
Spooning me
the sweetest medicine;
the narcotic of being wanted
massaging the tired arms
into that overwhelming need
to wrap them around you
unwilling to release the hold
You nibble at my neck
unbuttoning the work shirt
slipping the cool hand against my chest
speaking of things you have done
attending to my nipple
pleasing little pulls
seeing and feeling
the response
in my surrendered smile
tickling my mind
with eloquent words
and continued advancements.
do little to quell the throbbing
pressed against the cotton
of my captivity
Spooning me
the sweetest medicine;
the narcotic of being wanted
massaging the tired arms
into that overwhelming need
to wrap them around you
unwilling to release the hold
You nibble at my neck
unbuttoning the work shirt
slipping the cool hand against my chest
speaking of things you have done
attending to my nipple
pleasing little pulls
seeing and feeling
the response
in my surrendered smile
tickling my mind
with eloquent words
and continued advancements.
Published 24th Jan 2019
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24th Jan 2019 2:23am
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24th Jan 2019 3:42am
I loved your many erotic and sensual ones at that in the suggestion of your words. All puns intended;) This piece was so much more smooth with a touch of romance than your usual. Nothing is wrong with either of the musings but this one stands out. My favorite lines..
"These whispered enchantments
do little to quell the throbbing
pressed against the cotton
of my captivity"
"Spooning me
the sweetest medicine;
the narcotic of being wanted "
"tickling my mind
with eloquent words
and continued advancements"
Amazing job. My dearest compliments and an add to the poet!!!!
"These whispered enchantments
do little to quell the throbbing
pressed against the cotton
of my captivity"
"Spooning me
the sweetest medicine;
the narcotic of being wanted "
"tickling my mind
with eloquent words
and continued advancements"
Amazing job. My dearest compliments and an add to the poet!!!!
24th Jan 2019 4:18am
I like the that you saw a dash of smooth in this one. These poems can always take on a mood of there own. Perhaps a bit of the softer side shining through. Always appreciate your compliments and grateful for the RL add.
24th Jan 2019 4:22am
It's always my pleasure. I love your writes and know them enough by now to easily spot a change. Poems always come by the mood for me, I loved your mood in this one!
24th Jan 2019 6:34am
Anonymous
24th Jan 2019 6:47pm
"Pleasing little pulls" indeed darling one.
24th Jan 2019 10:50pm
