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Vienna rhaposdy
We sought regal humor
& death
of the body and mind.
burning in the filth and pyre ash of religion,
we sweat sinner Sunday church sacrilege.
souls destroyed themselves wallowing in vices.
jaw lines and seduction
devoured peach fuzz.
temptation kicked up pornographic thoughts.
lead violin brought us home
in a country not our own.
& death
of the body and mind.
burning in the filth and pyre ash of religion,
we sweat sinner Sunday church sacrilege.
souls destroyed themselves wallowing in vices.
jaw lines and seduction
devoured peach fuzz.
temptation kicked up pornographic thoughts.
lead violin brought us home
in a country not our own.
Published 23rd Jan 2019
Author's Note
Schönbrunn Palace, classical music, and cupcake countries i'd enjoy to visit.
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24th Jan 2019 4:58pm
fckin awesome bro
every line is fire but my fav two are
'burning in the filth and pyre ash of religion' and 'souls destroying themselves wallowing in vices'
vocab an imagery jus great overall
keep it up
every line is fire but my fav two are
'burning in the filth and pyre ash of religion' and 'souls destroying themselves wallowing in vices'
vocab an imagery jus great overall
keep it up
25th Jan 2019 1:36am
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