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REACTANT
Supercritical
spirit: hot, under pressure-
primed for change of state
spirit: hot, under pressure-
primed for change of state
Published 22nd Jan 2019
| Edited 23rd Jan 2019
Author's Note
Tip of the hat to Ahavati for suggesting a change.
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22nd Jan 2019 6:57pm
22nd Jan 2019 7:31pm
23rd Jan 2019 00:24am
It does pack a very powerful punch! I'm wondering how you could reword L3 so it's not so cliche an ending?
23rd Jan 2019 1:02am
23rd Jan 2019 2:03am
23rd Jan 2019 4:19pm
I updated it. For me personally, it now fits much better with my context for writing this.
23rd Jan 2019 4:23pm
23rd Jan 2019 5:14pm
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- Edited 5th Feb 2019 2:45am
24th Jan 2019 7:23am
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24th Jan 2019 1:53pm
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Feb 2019 2:45am
24th Jan 2019 2:00pm
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