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Whispers Of Fantasy
The whispers are loudest at daybreak
when thoughts float off on a breeze
arrousals awaiting arrival
captured by the way of your tease
the flutters are meant to adorn you
flowering in the smooth of your soul
each petal an appealing expression
of the beauty that sums up your whole
the sparkles that gleam in attraction
loom long in the depths of your eyes
where words hold hope of a future
and dreams of love come to fantasize
when thoughts float off on a breeze
arrousals awaiting arrival
captured by the way of your tease
the flutters are meant to adorn you
flowering in the smooth of your soul
each petal an appealing expression
of the beauty that sums up your whole
the sparkles that gleam in attraction
loom long in the depths of your eyes
where words hold hope of a future
and dreams of love come to fantasize
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22nd Jan 2019 4:39pm
Re. Whispers Of Fantasy
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2019 5:10pm
Timothy,
Very nice, my friend. Love the rhyme scheme(being the Dr. Suess-ish writer I am), and the sentiment.
Excellent.
MZ.
Very nice, my friend. Love the rhyme scheme(being the Dr. Suess-ish writer I am), and the sentiment.
Excellent.
MZ.
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22nd Jan 2019 5:19pm
Re. Whispers Of Fantasy
22nd Jan 2019 9:16pm
A fine and delicate love poem. Love the structure and rhyme scheme. This is a fantasy that whispers soft and clear.
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22nd Jan 2019 10:44pm
Re. Whispers Of Fantasy
23rd Jan 2019 2:02am
where words hold hope of a future
and dreams of love come to fantasize
i'm taking these words home
such a beautiful write
and dreams of love come to fantasize
i'm taking these words home
such a beautiful write
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23rd Jan 2019 1:38pm
Re. Whispers Of Fantasy
23rd Jan 2019 1:32pm
This is magnificent JT ... beautiful flow ... smooth in the ear ... resonates with me ... deeply ...
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23rd Jan 2019 1:39pm
Re. Whispers Of Fantasy
23rd Jan 2019 2:07pm
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23rd Jan 2019 2:10pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
24th Jan 2019 00:48am
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24th Jan 2019 1:15am