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Playtime
You know we both
know
it's almost a crime ...
how every doll wants to be played with
Taken down again
now and then
from the shelf
her lofty pedestal
Bought the frilliest
lace
perfect pretty face
then made a total mess
Doors once held
open
now locked up tight
shut in
For something quick
with her most private
dick
on sheets stained with others' sins
know
it's almost a crime ...
how every doll wants to be played with
Taken down again
now and then
from the shelf
her lofty pedestal
Bought the frilliest
lace
perfect pretty face
then made a total mess
Doors once held
open
now locked up tight
shut in
For something quick
with her most private
dick
on sheets stained with others' sins
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21st Jan 2019 4:40pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
21st Jan 2019 4:43pm
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21st Jan 2019 9:19pm
Lonely maiden ... yea ... that's about right ... dusky castle ... great writing prompt ...
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21st Jan 2019 5:40pm
Powerful and sad message. Expressed how life can change when no longer youthful and pretty.
Well expressed with the doll analogy. Bravo
Well expressed with the doll analogy. Bravo
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21st Jan 2019 9:20pm
Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 6:39pm
Lilith,
You've got a neat(yes, neat) mind. I like it. You're a fine writer(and a doll).
Nice.
Matthew.
You've got a neat(yes, neat) mind. I like it. You're a fine writer(and a doll).
Nice.
Matthew.
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21st Jan 2019 9:39pm
Any place you like the shower..... the flòor.... against the bedroom door.....
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21st Jan 2019 9:39pm
Any place you like the shower..... the flòor.... against the bedroom door.....
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
21st Jan 2019 8:25pm
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21st Jan 2019 9:22pm
Yes ... guess there is some ... funny how that can creep into a poem ... love how different readers can have different takeaways ...
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22nd Jan 2019 3:14pm
This is an amazing write, LilDragonFly. Now I need to read that book !!
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23rd Jan 2019 12:29pm
Thanks sweetie ... it's actually Lyrically_Inclined's poem "Rag Doll" ... leading me to this wonderful fantasy ...
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23rd Jan 2019 7:05pm
Funny enough, I put two and two together!! Lol. Whatever the inspiration, that sure was one hell of good one as your awesome write proves!
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23rd Jan 2019 3:03am
LilDragonFly, we could add the stain of our sins to that sheet. In fact, this private dick couldn't help himself with a doll like you. ;-)
XoXoXoXo
John
XoXoXoXo
John
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23rd Jan 2019 12:29pm
Hi Sir John ... oh how I've missed you ... thank you so much for the kind words and RL ...
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23rd Jan 2019 12:14pm
I don't know
if I am being BALLISH
but OM
you certainly have erotic
POLISH
or is it again's fettish
dolls
no way real perhaps could be
come tell me
you have the eroticaes
secrets
if I am being BALLISH
but OM
you certainly have erotic
POLISH
or is it again's fettish
dolls
no way real perhaps could be
come tell me
you have the eroticaes
secrets
1
23rd Jan 2019 12:30pm
Erotic polish ... love that ... thanks again ... for your visit ... kind words ... and RL ...
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