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Watch you Sleep
I want to watch you sleep
Tossing and turning
Violent
Turbulent
Messy hair
Chaos
Then I'll love you more
Honesty in your subconscious
Tossing and turning
Violent
Turbulent
Messy hair
Chaos
Then I'll love you more
Honesty in your subconscious
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Re. Watch you Sleep
Anonymous
20th Jan 2019 4:40pm
Oh, beautiful. Add coffee in bed too...perfect then. 🤗
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Re. Watch you Sleep
20th Jan 2019 6:39pm
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20th Jan 2019 6:46pm
Re. Watch you Sleep
20th Jan 2019 7:25pm
Hm... simultaneously creepy and romantic, observing someone in their vulnerability...
(Personally, I'd never be the object of this admiration, with my chainsaw snore. Apparently I'm an ugly sleeper.)
(Personally, I'd never be the object of this admiration, with my chainsaw snore. Apparently I'm an ugly sleeper.)
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20th Jan 2019 7:57pm
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Re. Watch you Sleep
22nd Jan 2019 00:14am
First thought this was Watch Your Step. Sometimes with these glasses I have to refocus. I am a watcher of sleepers. To date I have never known of anyone who would want to watch me.
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22nd Jan 2019 00:42am
Maybe we can have you sleep in a museum and you will be a conceptual exhibit ??