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A Mere Kiss
With eyes full of discern, the coalescian of his lips to mine, he craved; a dialogue in which he was welcome
For the sweet entreaty of his lips was no persuasion needed; hopeful for more was my entirity
In the mere partaking of his lips and tongue; my soul sweetly sighed as his embrace prevailed of my flesh
Beneath him; I lay as our mouths weld as one and interlaced, our tongues contend Stolen is my breath and in that moment; deaf and dumb to all else but him
By his whispered request; my
body succumbs - hungry are my sounds In the mere taste of his kiss and warm embrace; far more than my lips alone were then his
For the sweet entreaty of his lips was no persuasion needed; hopeful for more was my entirity
In the mere partaking of his lips and tongue; my soul sweetly sighed as his embrace prevailed of my flesh
Beneath him; I lay as our mouths weld as one and interlaced, our tongues contend Stolen is my breath and in that moment; deaf and dumb to all else but him
By his whispered request; my
body succumbs - hungry are my sounds In the mere taste of his kiss and warm embrace; far more than my lips alone were then his
Published 18th Jan 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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18th Jan 2019 10:29pm
19th Jan 2019 00:09am
Haha..thank you for such a wonderful compliment and the add. I'm just doing some creative writing.;)
Anonymous
18th Jan 2019 10:31pm
Pandora,
Your passion just exudes in so many of your poems.
You're a wonderfully passionate writer.
Great write.
Matthew.
Your passion just exudes in so many of your poems.
You're a wonderfully passionate writer.
Great write.
Matthew.
19th Jan 2019 00:21am
18th Jan 2019 11:23pm
Such beautiful illustrations in a simple kiss. The suggestive nature of that last line is heavenly.
"In the mere taste of his kiss and warm embrace; far more than my lips alone were then his"
"In the mere taste of his kiss and warm embrace; far more than my lips alone were then his"
19th Jan 2019 00:24am
I'm glad you liked that one best. Thank you for such a lovely comment. I hope you're doing well, dear friend!!☺
19th Jan 2019 00:27am
19th Jan 2019 00:36am
Eh, I'm feeling that way too. Blah, blah. It's all great til we clash with reality!
19th Jan 2019 1:20am
19th Jan 2019 1:26am
You are truly passionate sensual romantic poetess dear.
Yes that special kiss that is shared between to lovers of one heart, is the flame the grows into romantic sensual passionate fire of love making uninhibited and everlasting.🌹
Your imagery is as beautiful as the "Mere Kiss" you spoke so well in ink.😊
You touch the depth of romance so divinely dear.😊💐
Wolfman🐺
Yes that special kiss that is shared between to lovers of one heart, is the flame the grows into romantic sensual passionate fire of love making uninhibited and everlasting.🌹
Your imagery is as beautiful as the "Mere Kiss" you spoke so well in ink.😊
You touch the depth of romance so divinely dear.😊💐
Wolfman🐺
19th Jan 2019 3:24am
Thank you, dear Greywolfman. I'm always honored by your commentary and reflections. I'm so very grateful for the add.
19th Jan 2019 8:20am
You are very welcome PandoraUnleashed. Had to add this ink to my RL so I can reflect back to read from time to time.😊💐
Never change your depth of expressing your thoughts in ink.
Always beautiful and felt.🌹
Wolfman🐺
Never change your depth of expressing your thoughts in ink.
Always beautiful and felt.🌹
Wolfman🐺
21st Jan 2019 5:21pm
21st Jan 2019 9:20pm
You are welcome again, dear. Me being a gem was nice of you to say..lol..Thank for that...🌺💐
Wolfman🐺🌹
Wolfman🐺🌹
19th Jan 2019 9:41am
"my body succumbs......far more than my lips alone were then his" - best beautiful description of the moment of possession and penetration. In these few lines the kiss leads to much more.
21st Jan 2019 5:23pm
Thank you, Solomon_Song. This is such a wonderful comment, very much appreciated!!
19th Jan 2019 11:17am
21st Jan 2019 5:26pm
Thank you for the wonderful compliment, David. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Anonymous
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21st Jan 2019 7:49am
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21st Jan 2019 5:30pm
I'm glad you found it so. Thank you for the lovely compliment. I'm so glad DUP has these new pop-up features as I found your work that way. May we continue to enjoy our writing!!
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