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Hitchhike
I casually stuck out my thumb
And finally secured a ride
The driver fired up a joint
When I ducked and stepped inside
Turned out she wore a miniskirt
Showing off the smoothest thighs
I couldn't help but steal a glance
And she couldn't help but hear my sighs
She pulled into the next motel
And told me that I was in luck
The bed was small but adequate
For this hitcher to catch a fuck
She told me that it was enough
Sufficient for her kind of ride
She took my cock, gave it a lick
Then plunged it deftly deep inside
She preferred to be on top
To watch my face just as I came
She bounced 'til I was finally there
And her eyes turned to the bluest flame
We checked out, got in her car
And she drove me to Santa Cruz
I can't quite recall her name
Only that she was dressed in tie-dyed hues.
And finally secured a ride
The driver fired up a joint
When I ducked and stepped inside
Turned out she wore a miniskirt
Showing off the smoothest thighs
I couldn't help but steal a glance
And she couldn't help but hear my sighs
She pulled into the next motel
And told me that I was in luck
The bed was small but adequate
For this hitcher to catch a fuck
She told me that it was enough
Sufficient for her kind of ride
She took my cock, gave it a lick
Then plunged it deftly deep inside
She preferred to be on top
To watch my face just as I came
She bounced 'til I was finally there
And her eyes turned to the bluest flame
We checked out, got in her car
And she drove me to Santa Cruz
I can't quite recall her name
Only that she was dressed in tie-dyed hues.
Author's Note
Hitchhiking was commonplace back in the '60s and early '70s.
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Re. Hitchhike
16th Jan 2019 10:36pm
Makes me want to ditch my ride and put my thumb out. Well done and I enjoyed your piece.
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16th Jan 2019 11:00pm
It's a brave driver who has the nerve to pick up a hitchhiker these days. It's rare to even see them. It was more of a hippie phenomenon. Still might be worth a try. Thank you so much, Leo!
Re. Hitchhike
16th Jan 2019 10:41pm
Re: Re. Hitchhike
16th Jan 2019 11:03pm
It is only a fantasy. I got plenty of rides, but the rest of this is pure fiction. Wish I could say I had such luck. Thank you H.R.!
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2019 11:09pm
Your fantasy, my friend, catches my approval. Elegantly written and deliciously erotic. I wish I had the lack. Bravo. J
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Re: Re. Hitchhike
17th Jan 2019 00:40am
Those were the days! I got picked up by quite a diverse assortment of folks. It was not nearly as dangerous as it is today. Thank you J!
Re. Hitchhike
16th Jan 2019 11:11pm
exhilarating and sexy
free love hippie chick
who like to ride her rides giggles...
very hot...
love Brenda ❤
free love hippie chick
who like to ride her rides giggles...
very hot...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. Hitchhike
17th Jan 2019 00:42am
I just wish I really had this kind of luck. Still, I got plenty of rides of the vehicular variety. No detours to motels. Thank you Brenda!
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17th Jan 2019 00:44am
Re. Hitchhike
16th Jan 2019 11:44pm
nice write as i have hitchhike never got a raid like that
awesome ride and write
awesome ride and write
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17th Jan 2019 00:47am
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17th Jan 2019 2:06am
Re. Hitchhike
17th Jan 2019 3:33am
Hey Crow...sexy sexy ink.......maybe I need to hitchike somewhere......anywhere.......seriously......I enjoyed this much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Hitchhike
19th Jan 2019 00:16am
A little too dangerous these days, Flower. I'm sure you realize that. Thank you for the luv and kind comment!
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Anonymous
17th Jan 2019 4:00am
Ah fiction or not, this was a brilliant and sexy story.
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Re: Re. Hitchhike
19th Jan 2019 00:20am
It is a fact that I was an inveterate hitchhiker with more than my share of luck. I never got laid in the process, though. Thank you SoulzGirl!
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17th Jan 2019 4:08am
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19th Jan 2019 00:23am
Thank you Eerie. It was, at times, a little scary, but also kind of an adventure in the company of strangers. I think it was worth the risk back then. Thanks again.
Re. Hitchhike
17th Jan 2019 7:06pm
Re: Re. Hitchhike
19th Jan 2019 00:27am
Rides might be few and far between, but I know you're kidding. That was a phenomenon that is long in the past, far as I know. I'm glad you enjoyed this "pick me up."