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1/14/19
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1/14/19
Shit, babe
Everything is a failure
That is okay
Certainty
In inevitable doom can bring
Great peace and joy
Written by
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
Published
15th Jan 2019
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Written at a relative nadir
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#dark
#fate
#happiness
#peace
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Re. 1/14/19
Ahavati
- Edited 15th Jan 2019 2:14pm
15th Jan 2019 6:19am
Yes! That last stanza is golden! Contrast highlights the difference. It is strength of conviction to be able to write with such hope when at the lowest point.
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
15th Jan 2019 4:37pm
Thanks A
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jenjames
19th Jan 2019 6:15pm
Shit, babe
Everything is a failure
That is okay
it most certainly is! wonderful scribe
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
20th Jan 2019 4:33am
Thank you
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Re. 1/14/19
Angelast1
29th Jan 2019 8:04pm
When space gets so tight that there is no way out, the fighting suddenly stops.
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
29th Jan 2019 9:46pm
Indeed, and thus, a way out emerges.
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Angelast1
29th Jan 2019 9:49pm
Yes, the only way left becomes a simple walk in the right direction.
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