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Odin's Call
Sweat dripping from my lips
Tastes like copper
The wind in my face
Smells like war
Broadsword in my hands
Feels like commitment
Screams invading my head
Sounds like death
My eyes see the scene
Looks like Odin's Call
My soul is alight
This IS Odin's Call
Tastes like copper
The wind in my face
Smells like war
Broadsword in my hands
Feels like commitment
Screams invading my head
Sounds like death
My eyes see the scene
Looks like Odin's Call
My soul is alight
This IS Odin's Call
Published 14th Jan 2019
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14th Jan 2019 3:07pm
"Tastes like copper" ... great sensual image ... pulled me into the poem ...
17th Jan 2019 5:49am
