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Between the Lines
Vision
Seeing
New Order
I came with mischief
Left with a friend
New Order 2
Hats off to us
Visiting day
New Order 3
Parole approved
Released to your mind
New Order 4
Seeing
New Order
I came with mischief
Left with a friend
New Order 2
Hats off to us
Visiting day
New Order 3
Parole approved
Released to your mind
New Order 4
Published 13th Jan 2019
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13th Jan 2019 9:09pm
13th Jan 2019 9:10pm
13th Jan 2019 9:12pm
dearest Poet I love these orders...
there is a sense of liberation in them...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
there is a sense of liberation in them...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
13th Jan 2019 9:20pm
13th Jan 2019 10:14pm
I love order #2. Mischief and friendship should always go together, in my mind.
Nice work
Nice work
13th Jan 2019 10:18pm
Anonymous
14th Jan 2019 2:02pm
Always there's movement in your pieces. I see sunset in the background of this one. Like scraping frost off a window and peering out. Like!
14th Jan 2019 6:20pm
15th Jan 2019 5:47am
Between the frosting drizzle I see a cinnamon sunset and it's beautiful..
15th Jan 2019 11:32am
