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Lift Off
like dandelion seeds adrift
on unseen breezes which give lift
gravity has disappeared
it feels strange and slightly weird
still we're together blown along
it feels right, it can't be wrong
rising up and sinking down
spiraling above the ground
floating in the atmosphere
space above so very near
stars are twinkling overhead
auroras calling as we're led
into the place that's in between
who we are and who we've been
expanding intermingling
with the universe that is within
like dandelion seeds adrift
on unseen breezes which give lift
gravity has disappeared
it feels strange and slightly weird
on unseen breezes which give lift
gravity has disappeared
it feels strange and slightly weird
still we're together blown along
it feels right, it can't be wrong
rising up and sinking down
spiraling above the ground
floating in the atmosphere
space above so very near
stars are twinkling overhead
auroras calling as we're led
into the place that's in between
who we are and who we've been
expanding intermingling
with the universe that is within
like dandelion seeds adrift
on unseen breezes which give lift
gravity has disappeared
it feels strange and slightly weird
Published 12th Jan 2019
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14th Jan 2019 00:54am
Is it sadness I feel with this one Lawrence? I surely hope not. Hugs!
14th Jan 2019 6:46pm
14th Jan 2019 11:00pm
16th Jan 2019 7:27am
Yeah this is actually uplifting, soaring and heavenly light feel the way we feel in love usually so the metaphor and the imagery are great and apt in awesome rhyming. Kudos.
Plz do review/comment my newest poem too,
Plz do review/comment my newest poem too,
16th Jan 2019 3:10pm
