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A Cosmic Canvas (for our love)
A magnetic attraction brings heavenly bodies ever closer,
As our hearts burn brightly under starry skies.
Starry eyes, like windows to the soul, reveal the depths of your universe in a stellar way;
Our blazing hearts, burn ever brighter...
As supernovas burst and constellations collide, a million of miles above,
Explosions of emotions paint the sky, a canvas for our cosmic love.
As our hearts burn brightly under starry skies.
Starry eyes, like windows to the soul, reveal the depths of your universe in a stellar way;
Our blazing hearts, burn ever brighter...
As supernovas burst and constellations collide, a million of miles above,
Explosions of emotions paint the sky, a canvas for our cosmic love.
Published 12th Jan 2019
Author's Note
This poem was written for a competition with a cosmic theme. The objective was to express how the cosmos inspire you in a poem. I think it's quite clear how they inspire me, here.
Furthermore, this poem was unintentionally inspired by a poem called Cosmic Copulation, by 1Docmcruz (Nourish). Check it out here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/331244-cosmic-copulation/
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Oh, and picture credits go to miss D from We Heart It! Thanks so much for the beautiful image!
Furthermore, this poem was unintentionally inspired by a poem called Cosmic Copulation, by 1Docmcruz (Nourish). Check it out here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/331244-cosmic-copulation/
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Oh, and picture credits go to miss D from We Heart It! Thanks so much for the beautiful image!
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2019 7:11pm
How lovely. I hope you do have someone to illuminate the sky with.
I'm happy to have inspired you to write a new poem. =)
I'm happy to have inspired you to write a new poem. =)
12th Jan 2019 8:27pm
Thanks so much, Nourish! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! Indeed, I do! I hope the same for you as well :).
I really enjoyed your most recent poem, by the way; it's a beautifully, artistic homage to woman! We all have a women to thank for the miracle of motherhood, but women deserve much more recognition than that. Many great men were inspired by great women, and in today's society, slowly but surely, woman are becoming just as prominent in science, art, and medicine, and are finally beginning to garner the long-due respect that they deserve.
You're a wonderful poetess! Thanks again for your positive feedback!
I really enjoyed your most recent poem, by the way; it's a beautifully, artistic homage to woman! We all have a women to thank for the miracle of motherhood, but women deserve much more recognition than that. Many great men were inspired by great women, and in today's society, slowly but surely, woman are becoming just as prominent in science, art, and medicine, and are finally beginning to garner the long-due respect that they deserve.
You're a wonderful poetess! Thanks again for your positive feedback!
Anonymous
14th Jan 2019 7:08pm
This made me smile. I actually went to a women’s empowerment open mic this weekend. It was something I will remember for the rest of my life. There were women who lost their sons to gun violence sharing their stories and how they aré pressing fwd. in poetry form. It was intense and inspiring.
That's awesome and touching, Nourish. Thank you for sharing your beautiful experience with me :)
Anonymous
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13th Jan 2019 10:07pm
Thank you, once again, sir :). Your feedback and compliments are deeply appreciated!
16th Jan 2019 4:54pm
Hi, Carissimo.
I really liked this poem. I would recite within a sound mixer with synthesizers. I would translate into French. Then I would post on my YouTube page that nobody knows.
What do you think? Hugs
Rikasons
I really liked this poem. I would recite within a sound mixer with synthesizers. I would translate into French. Then I would post on my YouTube page that nobody knows.
What do you think? Hugs
Rikasons
16th Jan 2019 5:04pm
Hi there, Rikasons, and thanks so much for stopping by!
I don't know French well enough to translate it well, but it IS the 'language of love ❤️' so it seems fitting. Thanks for your feedback and the compliment!
I don't know French well enough to translate it well, but it IS the 'language of love ❤️' so it seems fitting. Thanks for your feedback and the compliment!
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26th Jan 2019 10:48pm
Thanks Tigershen, I appreciate that. This one was really enjoyable to write :)
Anonymous
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I really appreciate your kind comments. I am also honored by the RL entry. Many thanks for stopping by to read my poetry :)
