Nature, She Thought I Was Sleeping

Thank you, my friend. As for luck, I received my first decent night’s sleep in ages after this was completed. I’d say I felt very lucky as I awoke about half an hour ago (about 6:50AM (PST).

And to you. (I still need to see/comment).

Jade

Excellent entry, Jade.  Thank you for braving this difficult challenge.
Best of luck in the comp!

Thank you, Sage. I got a real night’s rest once I put this “to bed”. I’m actually grateful for this challenge, as it was another way for a poet to stretch ( while going slightly insane lol!), like the Wrimos I’ve done over the years. With one exception..,

THIS challenge was, for me, the ultimate Rubics Cube for the brain.

*respectful bow to you & Johnny*

Jade

Tell me about it! I was pulling my hair out . . .

Hey Jadey,
That is fabulous, honestly. Exquisitely worded, with a mesmerizing essence to it.
Beautiful. You're really gifted.
Love,
Matthew.

(RL's full, but remind me to put it on later. Thanks).

Thank you, puppy, but I worked hard for days just to figure out all 80 words and what to do... a challenge I was going to see through no matter what.

As for the RL, lol, I'm not going to remind you... I have no way of knowing when you have an empty space lol... silly pup.

You should do this for a living. Writing!

*hysterical laughing!!*😂

Omgosh, thanks, Andy! ...and I’m really GLAD you clarified that for the passers-by!!😉

*sucks in her breath*

Oh Andy, thank you!...
   .....thank you so much for the RL!

Why not do it for a living on a free lance basis?  That should do the trick.  Loved this one, and Ninja is in my lap even as I write this.  She says hi in kitty language.

*purrrringgg...*

Aawww thank you, my crowfly friend.

is there enough room with Ninja for me?

   🐯💌🐱
Jadey + Ninja

Nice work - glad to know I was not the only one who lost sleep on this comp entry   :))

Oh believe me, Josh, I’d lay odds just about everyone participating in this competition has lost sleep... with those who have yet to enter being those who are still burning the midnight oil. It’s the most difficult challenge I’ve ever done, and it came on the scene as I was laid low with stomach ‘flu. But the experience, no matter what the judges decide, is invaluable. As a writer, never forget.  
 
I will be heading over sometime soon to visit your entry and the others: to read, marvel & support!  
 
Jade  
 
p.s. I just made a tiny edit with the smallest word “a”, by switching it from one line to another. Such a simple change, but it made a difference... and made me even happier.☺️

every other day, i try and try. this weekend is my last ditch effort. it's now or never, lol.

*gives yelluw a supportive sister hug*  

We’ll do some deep breathing exercise, then go for a peaceful evening walk. Have cups of hot tea, then get a good sleep. When you awaken, your pores and your mind will be open to possibilities of circulation & inspiration.

🐾👈Tiger paw massage

i've never gotten a tiger paw massage before, i think that will be the key that turns it all around.

thank you, needed those words! big hugs back.

Hi Haley, this is how I started it. Type up the 80 words alphabetically. Type them up phonetically. Stare at them (!) and start writing phrases 'till a theme emerges. Carry on through the night. (hmmmm)  :))

hey Josh- i'll try that, thanks. anything to get the list moving around

my way was to break them into 3 columns of closed class grammar (pronouns, prepositions etc) vs the open (nouns verbs adverb adj)

i don't work phonetically per se (somewhat I do intuitively but not my original lead since Deaf myself-  it's not something that comes naturally, but totally from academic standpoint and something i have to work at and feel around)

something will generate!!

Very sweet! 💞

Why thank you, Kimmy, for coming in for a read. I’m so glad you like.

cohesive and pretty!!! (that's all i would want out of it lol) fist bump.

Ahh dear Haley, I’m very touched by your reaction & impression of my most humble effort, thank you!

I'm not familiar with the challenge nor the requirements but this poem is beautiful piece of art.  I can see great deal of discipline and craftsmanship.  Well done Jade and best of luck in the competition.

Sweet sister of the Pen, gracious thanks. I’m terribly honored, from you, of such vindication of everything I put of myself into this piece.

hats off Jadey!

mesmerized.

Really?

So few words, yet such honor gifted!  Thank you, my dear friend.

well dear Friend... was speechless...lost for words... it is what it is, whatever i could, express aptly.
:-)

Yes of course, dearest, I understood completely. I was just so surprised to see you with the RL honor... I too was speechless.

☺️

Captivating poetry, ma'am! Thanks so much for posting :)

Why thank you, poet, I’m touched as you honor me with coming by for a read, embracing work of mine, and offering me words of support. My best to you.

I'm surprised I didn't find this lovely poem sooner. It's absolutely magical :)

*blushes*

Thank you, Poet, for returning, and oh my...

An RL honor bestowed upon my words.

You're very welcome. The praise is well deserved :)