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echo
I'm hurting but you can't see me
I'm fading but you can't stop the pain
my soul is hollow
it echoes the heartbreak
will you always love me?
a question reverberating through time
I push the boundaries
of what our love can bear
I can't seem to stop myself
I'm falling
losing my grip
you watch on helplessly
hoping I will get back up
I'm on the ledge
each step you take towards me
pushes me closer to the edge
so you call to me
please come back, baby
back to safety
secure in my arms
I won't let you fall
or fade
you're safe here
now don't look down
I got you
your love echoes
it sends shots through me
I know you will always love me
I enter your embrace
no looking back
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Re: Re. echo
11th Jan 2019 3:23pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
11th Jan 2019 4:04pm
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Re. echo
Anonymous
11th Jan 2019 4:15pm
Dearest Crimmy,
That's just beautiful. What a remarkably candid, heartfelt, beautiful poem.
I applaud you for bearing your beautiful soul, and hope you realize that anyone who has once loved you, will forever love you.
Matthew.
(Note: have to clear out some RL room, sorry).
That's just beautiful. What a remarkably candid, heartfelt, beautiful poem.
I applaud you for bearing your beautiful soul, and hope you realize that anyone who has once loved you, will forever love you.
Matthew.
(Note: have to clear out some RL room, sorry).

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Anonymous
11th Jan 2019 4:42pm
In the end, my beautiful Dark Angel, the love that will matter the most is the love you have for yourself. Until you find that, lean on ours. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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11th Jan 2019 5:50pm
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11th Jan 2019 8:51pm
That embrace is the most powerful of drugs. It indicates support and redemption, seems to me. This is one I have to keep.
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11th Jan 2019 11:23pm
I hope the gentleman to who inspired this poem realizes how lucky he is.
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12th Jan 2019 5:55am
This reads like a diary entry, in the best way <3 Glad to read your loveliness again!
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13th Jan 2019 5:27pm
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Re: Re. echo
13th Jan 2019 5:34pm
thank you dearest poet for feeling my depths... this one hurts to look at because it's the truth...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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