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The First Snow of the Season
Published 10th Jan 2019
Author's Note
I wrote this one for a visual poetry competition with winter as the theme. I really wanted the word sparkle to shine, but couldn't find the effect that I was looking for. Enjoy :)
This is intended for the purpose of art, with no intention of financial gain, and due respect to the creator of this image. In posting this, I take full responsibility for any copyright claims that could potentially, but are unlikely, to rise from me posting this image; therefore waiving the responsibility of the owners or anyone affiliated with the website. I will remove the image if necessary.
For the record, the image was offered as a free wallpaper on my computer. The image fit the poem so well that I just had to use it. I sincerely hope it is no issue.
This is intended for the purpose of art, with no intention of financial gain, and due respect to the creator of this image. In posting this, I take full responsibility for any copyright claims that could potentially, but are unlikely, to rise from me posting this image; therefore waiving the responsibility of the owners or anyone affiliated with the website. I will remove the image if necessary.
For the record, the image was offered as a free wallpaper on my computer. The image fit the poem so well that I just had to use it. I sincerely hope it is no issue.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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10th Jan 2019 4:30pm
Thanks for the comment! You made it to the poem before I added the image, though. Since you're the first person to see it, please let me know if it's easily legible. Thank you again!
10th Jan 2019 6:12pm
h; yes it's legible - the white stands out well on the dark background, however, i may have chosen a san serif font for ease of reading.
Thanks for the helpful advice and feedback. I am attached to this font and its elegance, but took into consideration what you said. Here is a link to an alternate version of it with different font:
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=1T5xo5PFcUJrQ6nvuSVIk17H2Hq3FECPD
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=1T5xo5PFcUJrQ6nvuSVIk17H2Hq3FECPD
10th Jan 2019 6:57pm
You're right about that. I did it again but in a less abrasive font. Thanks. I also included a version with the same fancy font, but with the poem centered to see what people prefer.
Anonymous
11th Jan 2019 00:41am
Hey NewB,
That's beautiful, my friend.
And the picture really accents the wonderful writing.
Awesome!
MZ.
That's beautiful, my friend.
And the picture really accents the wonderful writing.
Awesome!
MZ.
11th Jan 2019 3:13am
Thanks again for stopping by. You always have encouraging words to say. So glad that you enjoyed it :)
15th Jan 2019 6:46am
Beautiful image and words! The trail of footprints really add the human touch to nature.
Best of luck in the comp!
Best of luck in the comp!
15th Jan 2019 6:59am
17th Jan 2019 2:28pm
Loved your glistening imagery, beautifully expressed.! What inspiration nature so graciously cloaks us in. Enjoyed...
17th Jan 2019 3:43pm
21st Jan 2019 8:27pm
21st Jan 2019 8:40pm
Hey Leo, thanks for dropping by and taking the time to read and comment. Your compliment is sincerely appreciated :)
