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Tide and Time
Tide and time wait for no man
Icy shards reflect what is seen
but not what is meant to be
I will wait not on tomorrow
as the temples begin to grey
time moves along but not alone
it has hope, it has perseverance
it's dawns erupt and it's dusks construct
moments where feelings come alive
where wanton needs are met
on twisted trails or amid broken sails
moments laying meaning to time
lost in an incomprehensible continuum
I will not wait on tommorow
and let time dictate the day
I will ride the trails
I will open my sails
in hope it will bring me to you
Icy shards reflect what is seen
but not what is meant to be
I will wait not on tomorrow
as the temples begin to grey
time moves along but not alone
it has hope, it has perseverance
it's dawns erupt and it's dusks construct
moments where feelings come alive
where wanton needs are met
on twisted trails or amid broken sails
moments laying meaning to time
lost in an incomprehensible continuum
I will not wait on tommorow
and let time dictate the day
I will ride the trails
I will open my sails
in hope it will bring me to you
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Re. Tide and Time
Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 1:59pm
Movement is everything. Can't wait for the perfect time. Gotta make it happen. Lovely breath of fresh air this morning. :-)
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9th Jan 2019 2:01pm
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 5:37pm
Very nice, my friend! It's a Justim Love Invictus!(I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul. But not in a plagurizy type of way at all. Not saying that). But it's really good my friend.
MZ.
MZ.
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9th Jan 2019 6:44pm
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 6:53pm
You know, we had to memorize Invictus for Mr. Hines' English class in High School, and if he was walking through the hallways, and pointed at you, you had to recite it right there in the hall! It was part of your grade, on how well you did. It was a nightmare(I was shy). I avoided him like the plague...until I got the plague, then I avoided him like Leprosy. lol.
Crazy youth. Seems like I was younger then...hmmm...
MZ.
Crazy youth. Seems like I was younger then...hmmm...
MZ.
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9th Jan 2019 6:57pm
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 7:05pm
Hey! I have more knowledge in my whole brain than you have in your little finger!...or something like that.
MZ.
MZ.
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Re: Re. Tide and Time
9th Jan 2019 7:07pm
Now you're not playing fair.
That's the finger that got broken by the New Jersey Mafia
That's the finger that got broken by the New Jersey Mafia
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 7:14pm
What did they do? Punch you in the nose? LOL!!
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Re: Re. Tide and Time
9th Jan 2019 7:14pm
....and no I don't want to help you look for Jimmy Hoffa under the Meadowlands
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9th Jan 2019 7:15pm
Re. Tide and Time
9th Jan 2019 8:18pm
dearest Tim this is a very passionate write
of taking your love in your hands
not waiting on fate to blow you upon her shore
but creating your own destiny...
beautiful...
love Brenda 💕
of taking your love in your hands
not waiting on fate to blow you upon her shore
but creating your own destiny...
beautiful...
love Brenda 💕
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9th Jan 2019 8:22pm
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9th Jan 2019 8:26pm
I understand dearest Tim and perhaps fate is waiting on you to do just that step and make it happen ❤
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9th Jan 2019 11:44pm
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