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Peeking Inside Your Soul
peeked within your soul today
intrigued by what I might find
hidden away deep in your heart
amazing finding a sparkling light
beautifully flickering like purple stars
warmness of you all around me
your deep inhale sent a chill of air
moving closer to the beautiful light
could feel whispers of luv vibrating
my heart began to shiver
not from cold but words it felt
suddenly silence came
slowly peeking thru your eyes
holding your bedroom window open
nakedly looking to a darkened starry sky
vision of myself I could see
as I peeked inside your thoughts
what beauty you see within me
now I know just how luving you are
feeling you express luv in whispers
while looking my way at end of day
I too look towards heavens dark horizon
feeling our hearts whispering secrets
of the sensational luv we share
Copyright © 2019 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
intrigued by what I might find
hidden away deep in your heart
amazing finding a sparkling light
beautifully flickering like purple stars
warmness of you all around me
your deep inhale sent a chill of air
moving closer to the beautiful light
could feel whispers of luv vibrating
my heart began to shiver
not from cold but words it felt
suddenly silence came
slowly peeking thru your eyes
holding your bedroom window open
nakedly looking to a darkened starry sky
vision of myself I could see
as I peeked inside your thoughts
what beauty you see within me
now I know just how luving you are
feeling you express luv in whispers
while looking my way at end of day
I too look towards heavens dark horizon
feeling our hearts whispering secrets
of the sensational luv we share
Copyright © 2019 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 9th Jan 2019
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9th Jan 2019 2:58am
Wonderfully written! Love the cosmic beauty you've spilled here phenomenal👏👏
"vision of myself I could see
as I peeked inside your thoughts
what beauty you see within me"
Love this verse! Exquisitely expressed👏
Excellent write!
"vision of myself I could see
as I peeked inside your thoughts
what beauty you see within me"
Love this verse! Exquisitely expressed👏
Excellent write!
17th Jan 2019 1:19am
Hey Hunter........thank you for visiting my ink.......I’m smiling reading your wonderful words.......so glad you enjoyed this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jan 2019 3:36am
17th Jan 2019 1:21am
Hey Billy.......always luv when you smile upon my ink.......thank you for saying so much in just a few words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jan 2019 5:12am
17th Jan 2019 1:23am
Hey E......I’m so happy you’ve visited me........happier you’ve enjoyed this.......thank you for taking time for me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Jan 2019 8:39pm
I think I'm subbed to you, which is how I got here. Your title sucked my busy head right in. I run past many titles for lack of time.
23rd Jan 2019 2:53am
Awe.....I’m honored for you to have taken time for me.......thank you for the uplifting support. Purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
9th Jan 2019 5:15am
Flower,
That is so lovely!
'From beautiful hearts, and beautiful souls, come beautiful words'.
It's not fair, you have such a wonderful heart that you can write more beautiful than us!
You're awesome, my friend.
Glad I know you.
Love,
Matthew.
That is so lovely!
'From beautiful hearts, and beautiful souls, come beautiful words'.
It's not fair, you have such a wonderful heart that you can write more beautiful than us!
You're awesome, my friend.
Glad I know you.
Love,
Matthew.
Hey Matthew........you sell yourself short my precious friend.......you write brilliantly......so sweet and tender.......you can lift an Angel higher than heaven with any of your inks.......I’m lifted every time I read one. Thank you for the awesome encouragement......honored by the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
17th Jan 2019 2:59pm
See Flower! You can even comment more beautifully than the rest of us!! lol.
You're a wonderful girl.
Love,
Matthew.
You're a wonderful girl.
Love,
Matthew.
9th Jan 2019 6:37am
17th Jan 2019 2:53am
Hey Rose......always a privledge to have a postess like you to leave me praise.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jan 2019 10:42am
17th Jan 2019 2:59am
Hey Avahati.......you’re a spiritual soul.......you always feel beyond the words......thank you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jan 2019 3:31pm
17th Jan 2019 3:01am
Hey TIG.......thank you for the blessing of your words.......you make me smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jan 2019 5:42pm
17th Jan 2019 3:02am
Hey Josh......he’s very indeed in my life.......thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Jan 2019 1:28am
You always calm me Flower, with your very distinctive, gentle style. You favor the color purple, and the glory of luv. No one writes like you. Magnificent!
17th Jan 2019 3:09am
Hey Crow.......you make my heart throb with joy........thank you for making me feel worthy of life.......sending lots of purple luv & many hugs xo :)
10th Jan 2019 2:36pm
17th Jan 2019 3:10am
Hey Snuggle.......you are so right......it can be glorious for sure......thank you for visiting me.......great thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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17th Jan 2019 3:11am
Hey Orenda......always pleased to see you upon my ink.......you’re a beautiful soul.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Jan 2019 3:13am
17th Jan 2019 3:13am
Hey Howling.......always a gracious soft to see you upon my ink......thank you for your touching praise.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Jan 2019 8:54am
Sensational poem, like feelings 'across the pond'. Poetic and charming to read. Kudos.
Plz do review/comment my newest poem .
Plz do review/comment my newest poem .
17th Jan 2019 3:17am
Hey Z.......beautiful avatar.......thank you for visiting my ink.......I will be stopping by your way soon.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
