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Spirits under the sun pt3./ hello lost love
I don't need no false connections.
And I don't need any
misconceptions.
I can see,
only through
being marooned,
don't think an ending's coming soon.
No!
Don't think any ending's coming soon.
One by one, we're still souls under the sun.
One by one, still spirits beneath the sun.
)interlude(
Hello lost love,
I'm ready to explore.
Hello,
hello,
hello.
Hello, old friend.
There's nothing you can say
to make me disappear.
Hello?
And I don't need any
misconceptions.
I can see,
only through
being marooned,
don't think an ending's coming soon.
No!
Don't think any ending's coming soon.
One by one, we're still souls under the sun.
One by one, still spirits beneath the sun.
)interlude(
Hello lost love,
I'm ready to explore.
Hello,
hello,
hello.
Hello, old friend.
There's nothing you can say
to make me disappear.
Hello?
Published 7th Jan 2019
| Edited 8th Jan 2019
Author's Note
Parts 10 and 11 of this never ending trip
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8th Jan 2019 00:11am
I think this would make a really good song with the right music, Hunter.
One thing:
And I don't [no]
misconceptions.
You either meant do or know?
One thing:
And I don't [no]
misconceptions.
You either meant do or know?
8th Jan 2019 12:28pm
Thanks very much Ahavati! I agree as well!
And actually I meant "and I don't need any"
Thanks for catching that
Much appreciation!🙏
And actually I meant "and I don't need any"
Thanks for catching that
Much appreciation!🙏
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
8th Jan 2019 00:33am
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8th Jan 2019 12:28pm
yes, feels lyrical & crisp to read..
liked the refrain yet again I read in you, in just a word in here
the unceasing spirits that we are..
esp. loved these
" One by one, we're still souls under the sun.
One by one, still spirits beneath the sun."
& this one
"There's nothing you can say
to make me disappear. "
short & full of never-setting sun dear poet! write on :)
liked the refrain yet again I read in you, in just a word in here
the unceasing spirits that we are..
esp. loved these
" One by one, we're still souls under the sun.
One by one, still spirits beneath the sun."
& this one
"There's nothing you can say
to make me disappear. "
short & full of never-setting sun dear poet! write on :)
9th Jan 2019 00:03am
Thanks so much uma for your lovely comment!🙏
Very inspiring
I'm delighted to receive praise from the master herself!
Much appreciation! Thanks 🙏
Very inspiring
I'm delighted to receive praise from the master herself!
Much appreciation! Thanks 🙏
