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A Matter of Taste
He says that he likes her taste
Licks her until she screams
He proceeds, but not in haste
It's her pleasure, it seems
She may buck but he holds on
His tongue flicking at her lips
She ululates like devil's spawn
As his own reason slips
She says that she likes his flavor
Her mouth descending on his cock
A massive organ to savor
And she could suck him 'round the clock
Their preference is sixty nine
And I can't help but stare
As their voyeur pouring out the wine
While they proceed with flair.
Licks her until she screams
He proceeds, but not in haste
It's her pleasure, it seems
She may buck but he holds on
His tongue flicking at her lips
She ululates like devil's spawn
As his own reason slips
She says that she likes his flavor
Her mouth descending on his cock
A massive organ to savor
And she could suck him 'round the clock
Their preference is sixty nine
And I can't help but stare
As their voyeur pouring out the wine
While they proceed with flair.
Published 6th Jan 2019
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6th Jan 2019 7:29pm
giggles at this very hot and saucy write
the ending gave me a tickle...
love Brenda 💕
the ending gave me a tickle...
love Brenda 💕
6th Jan 2019 7:55pm
Glad you're pleased, Brenda. I'd hate for this to be considered tasteless. Thank you for the kind comment!
Love, Thomas
Love, Thomas
6th Jan 2019 7:52pm
Ha, very erotic and fantastic ending. Lucky to even be the voyer in a bout of such passion. Great work.
6th Jan 2019 9:19pm
Anonymous
6th Jan 2019 7:56pm
Fantastic! I loved the added giggles, Crowfly!
6th Jan 2019 9:22pm
Thank you SoulzGirl69! This is meant for a few laughs. If I've succeeded, I'm delighted. Thank you for the RL entry!
6th Jan 2019 8:02pm
6th Jan 2019 9:23pm
6th Jan 2019 8:59pm
I find this position to be the most vulnerable for both involved. Exposing on of the bodies most tenderly sensitive parts to another who in one instant can cause so much damage or an adrenaline rush of pleasure.
Lovely piece dear Crow.
Lovely piece dear Crow.
8th Jan 2019 2:14am
Anonymous
7th Jan 2019 2:32am
I love the way you manage always to give light to new images. Always fresh and always so open minded, yet giving the view of a spectator, whilst being a descriptive chronist, being objective. You are a complete writer. You can write anything. Well done. J
8th Jan 2019 2:18am
Thank you for the kind words, J. I try to be as versatile as possible. Your writing puts me to shame, though. You have an eloquence I can only aspire to, even with your Italian translations.
Anonymous
8th Jan 2019 11:10am
No my friend. You are truly a great writer. No shame at all. I admire your work. J
7th Jan 2019 2:33am
Cheers to a great view. Enjoyed your piece. Had to look up ululates - thanks for expanding my vocabulary.
8th Jan 2019 2:19am
7th Jan 2019 11:03am
I always think the 69 position is uncomfortable:) but that's a good read, Crowfly.
8th Jan 2019 2:20am
Haven't tried it in many years, so I'm faking it with this poem. My memory fails. Thank you Grace!
Bravo Sir Crow! I learned a new word "ululate." that's always a good thing 😁
8th Jan 2019 5:02am
