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A New Beginning
Standing at the peak of the mountain of life, an omniscient view around me.
What lies behind me, a troubled past, but a memory inside my head.
Where I stand is solid ground, a place to rest my tired mind;
And to the skies I see my future shining bright before my eyes.
What lies behind me, a troubled past, but a memory inside my head.
Where I stand is solid ground, a place to rest my tired mind;
And to the skies I see my future shining bright before my eyes.
Published 6th Jan 2019
Author's Note
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This poem is essentially me self-reflecting: past, present, future: experiences, people, emotions, trauma, goals etc.
In the first line, the mountain and the omniscient view are symbolic of my improved self-awareness, and just having more wisdom and insight to see the 'bigger picture' of life now.
The second line: Although I had kind of a messed up childhood, I have been able to overcome it, and I don't let it hold me back in my life anymore.
In the third line, I take a moment to appreciate that things in my life are more stable now than they used to be, and the fact that I am living rather comfortably in comparison to before. It is also symbolic of me 'getting comfortable' and content with my life.
The last line: my optimism for the future :)
This poem is essentially me self-reflecting: past, present, future: experiences, people, emotions, trauma, goals etc.
In the first line, the mountain and the omniscient view are symbolic of my improved self-awareness, and just having more wisdom and insight to see the 'bigger picture' of life now.
The second line: Although I had kind of a messed up childhood, I have been able to overcome it, and I don't let it hold me back in my life anymore.
In the third line, I take a moment to appreciate that things in my life are more stable now than they used to be, and the fact that I am living rather comfortably in comparison to before. It is also symbolic of me 'getting comfortable' and content with my life.
The last line: my optimism for the future :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
6th Jan 2019 2:21am
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6th Jan 2019 2:37am
6th Jan 2019 4:30am
6th Jan 2019 5:51am
6th Jan 2019 4:45am
I see hope in your poem. A great start for you, and for me too.
Nicely written!
Jasmine
Nicely written!
Jasmine
6th Jan 2019 5:52am
Anonymous
6th Jan 2019 7:16am
NB,
Very nice self-reflective poem.
Excellent write.
MZ.
Very nice self-reflective poem.
Excellent write.
MZ.
6th Jan 2019 7:41am
Matthew, thank you so much for taking the time to read my poetry :). I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
6th Jan 2019 12:07pm
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6th Jan 2019 12:13pm
Orenda! Thank you for stopping by again! I'm glad that you enjoyed my ink :)
6th Jan 2019 12:26pm
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6th Jan 2019 12:58pm
Beware of explaining your writings .Let the reader add to the poem their own thoughts I have enjoyed this poem. One of the challenges for the poet to overcome / develop is to realise the poem should be of you yet not about you.We all wish to reveal ourselves but must not be tempted to reveal too much This is a fine write. . . . . . . . . Kexby on my reading list Happy New Year
6th Jan 2019 1:06pm
Thanks for you're advice and your wonderfully kind words! Happy New Year, Kexby!
8th Jan 2019 4:39am
every sentence, every word, every incomprehensive letter..indefinitely understood
8th Jan 2019 6:19am
Hey there, Noire. I'm really glad that my poetry spoke to you. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!
9th Jan 2019 2:01am
I will think of this as your signature poem because the title bears your pseudonym.
Much of me is in it -- the spirit of the naturalist, the self reflection, the remnant of hope beyond the dark. "peak of the mountain of life," "omniscient view," "solid ground," "skies," and "future shining bright" are the positive images that loom at me. Nothing extraneous: a conservative epistle.
Congratulations!
Much of me is in it -- the spirit of the naturalist, the self reflection, the remnant of hope beyond the dark. "peak of the mountain of life," "omniscient view," "solid ground," "skies," and "future shining bright" are the positive images that loom at me. Nothing extraneous: a conservative epistle.
Congratulations!
10th Jan 2019 1:45am
Wow, man! Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I really appreciate the kind words and compliments, and I'm delighted that you found it relatable!
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Jul 2019 12:45pm
13th Jan 2019 6:38am
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13th Jan 2019 6:48am
Thanks for your encouraging comment, WhispersWeKeep. I'm glad that my poem resonated with you. It really means a lot to me that people can relate, so thanks also for taking the time to comment.
I went to your profile and realized that you joined today and you don't have any poems up yet, so I just wanted to say welcome to DU! I look forward to reading your poetry!
I went to your profile and realized that you joined today and you don't have any poems up yet, so I just wanted to say welcome to DU! I look forward to reading your poetry!
14th Jan 2019 9:53am
14th Jan 2019 10:02am
At times we must all evaluate and reflect on our lives to better ourselves. I'm glad to be able to inspire you :). Best of luck on your journey, and thanks so much for your comment, rosegold!
13th Feb 2019 5:43pm
