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Cross My Mind
Yesterdays yearn for tomorrows
As your soul comes rattle my door
Memories couldn't get much better
Each moment your wave hits my shore
Nothings so simple mean everything
In the way you move thru my air
Each breath we breathe so precious
Living life with a freedom and care
Euphoric in passion lips crave
Delicate drips off your skin
Announcing thru words with eruption
Meticulous thrusts in the wind
Evening has nothing against you
Its stars come out to see
Holding its stare for a moment
Pleading to set your soul free
Oceans will move in your springtime
Steadfast my breeze crossed your mind
As your soul comes rattle my door
Memories couldn't get much better
Each moment your wave hits my shore
Nothings so simple mean everything
In the way you move thru my air
Each breath we breathe so precious
Living life with a freedom and care
Euphoric in passion lips crave
Delicate drips off your skin
Announcing thru words with eruption
Meticulous thrusts in the wind
Evening has nothing against you
Its stars come out to see
Holding its stare for a moment
Pleading to set your soul free
Oceans will move in your springtime
Steadfast my breeze crossed your mind
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Re. Cross My Mind
5th Jan 2019 11:16am
This one is so good ... swirls you up ... away ... I could feel the desire ... the beauty ... wonderful JT ...
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5th Jan 2019 3:18pm
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5th Jan 2019 3:19pm
Re. Cross My Mind
Anonymous
5th Jan 2019 4:29pm
You captured the essence of a breathe embodied in a spirit so beautifully here. Swept away with emotion, that's how this one feels
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Re: Re. Cross My Mind
5th Jan 2019 4:32pm
Thank you dearest Willow. Your comments brighten my day, well that and 52 and Sunny in January lol
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2019 4:36pm
Yeah, what is up with the warm weather anyway? It's surreal...55° expected here today. My allergies are completely confused...lol
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Re. Cross My Mind
5th Jan 2019 5:22pm
Excellent piece JusTim i enjoyed!👏
"Evening has nothing against you
It's stars come out to see
Holding it's stare for a moment
Pleading to set your soul free" beautifully said👏
"Evening has nothing against you
It's stars come out to see
Holding it's stare for a moment
Pleading to set your soul free" beautifully said👏
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5th Jan 2019 5:32pm
Re. Cross My Mind
5th Jan 2019 11:32pm
A wonderful love poem jusTim. It crosses my mind that you are a poet of enormous skill.
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5th Jan 2019 11:51pm
Re. Cross My Mind
Anonymous
6th Jan 2019 00:03am
Hey, nice write, my friend. Very loving.
MZ.
MZ.
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6th Jan 2019 1:19am
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2019 1:21am
Oooow, on my way! Lol.
Thanks!
MZ.
Thanks!
MZ.
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