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Mermaid Bones
We are aquatic ghosts—
skeletal treasures plundered
against an elite echelon
of wise knowledge.
Oceans wash our past
over the shore; saying,
‘You never left us—
we rest inside you'.
A continental shelf
is heavy with seafaring lore;
our feathered gills filter air—
salt brines our tongue in war.
Nets lure tangled stitches
of bait, dragging for the oyster-
pearl of our being as proof.
‘Let us see you!’
sailors howl rum-drunk
at the moon.
But, we'll shove our bones to sea—
nest them as petrified wood
before caged as chattel;
build sandcastles on the beach—
waves reminding us
we can only be plucked by death;
Biologists will gut us, discover we are tiny—
malnourished, trawl for bigger game;
our caudal fin curling, barnacled
under the shadow of pursuit...
while groper fish push their jaws closer—
the whorl of their eyes our judge and jailer;
Our inner naiad, in darkest water
remains a bloody warrior.
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skeletal treasures plundered
against an elite echelon
of wise knowledge.
Oceans wash our past
over the shore; saying,
‘You never left us—
we rest inside you'.
A continental shelf
is heavy with seafaring lore;
our feathered gills filter air—
salt brines our tongue in war.
Nets lure tangled stitches
of bait, dragging for the oyster-
pearl of our being as proof.
‘Let us see you!’
sailors howl rum-drunk
at the moon.
But, we'll shove our bones to sea—
nest them as petrified wood
before caged as chattel;
build sandcastles on the beach—
waves reminding us
we can only be plucked by death;
Biologists will gut us, discover we are tiny—
malnourished, trawl for bigger game;
our caudal fin curling, barnacled
under the shadow of pursuit...
while groper fish push their jaws closer—
the whorl of their eyes our judge and jailer;
Our inner naiad, in darkest water
remains a bloody warrior.
~
Author's Note
We need a #mermaid theme.
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Re. Mermaid Bones
5th Jan 2019 1:17am
lol, in recent poem I also commented on not having a # theme. (#LANGUAGE!?) so many pieces refer to language itself.
"Salt brines our tongue in war" really stood out to me. I was going to ask you for a link to your original pieces, I realized I only ever read your tributes. XD
"Salt brines our tongue in war" really stood out to me. I was going to ask you for a link to your original pieces, I realized I only ever read your tributes. XD
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5th Jan 2019 1:33pm
Re. Mermaid Bones
Anonymous
5th Jan 2019 1:53am
Let me say that this is shear beauty. J

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5th Jan 2019 1:34pm
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2019 2:39am
I see you've been perfecting this poem! Naiad is a much better choice. And a warrior bloodied you are. ❤📝
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Re: Re. Mermaid Bones
5th Jan 2019 1:36pm
Arrrr, Matey! They'll never take me alive! 😂
Yes, I like Naiad much better too. 🌊❤
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Yes, I like Naiad much better too. 🌊❤
💜💑💋
Re. Mermaid Bones
Anonymous
5th Jan 2019 7:07am
''‘You never left us –
we rest inside you'. ''
how deep this resonates..
this is beautiful all the way around..
we rest inside you'. ''
how deep this resonates..
this is beautiful all the way around..

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5th Jan 2019 1:37pm
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Re: Re. Mermaid Bones
5th Jan 2019 1:39pm
Thank you, Dear Melia! Yes; the divine feminine.
Love your reference to Atlantis! There's so much we only innately know of our past while in this flesh. 🌊
Love your reference to Atlantis! There's so much we only innately know of our past while in this flesh. 🌊
Re. Mermaid Bones
Anonymous
5th Jan 2019 12:57pm
glorious write

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5th Jan 2019 1:40pm
Re. Mermaid Bones
5th Jan 2019 4:28pm
Wowo amazing piece Ahavati!
excellent!👏
Fantastic flow and a deep resonating message striking my soul👏
The opening lines blew me away right off the bat
"We are aquatic ghosts –
skeletal treasures plundered
against an elite echelon
of wise knowledge."
Love this!
"Oceans wash our past
over the shore; saying,
‘You never left us –
we rest inside you'."
This is like....
I imagine seeing this message carved into some giant boulder in some ancient isolated land that I'm stranded on and I come across this eternal message
which just blows my mind
Ha just a wonderful piece purely poetic I love it!
excellent!👏
Fantastic flow and a deep resonating message striking my soul👏
The opening lines blew me away right off the bat
"We are aquatic ghosts –
skeletal treasures plundered
against an elite echelon
of wise knowledge."
Love this!
"Oceans wash our past
over the shore; saying,
‘You never left us –
we rest inside you'."
This is like....
I imagine seeing this message carved into some giant boulder in some ancient isolated land that I'm stranded on and I come across this eternal message
which just blows my mind
Ha just a wonderful piece purely poetic I love it!
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Re: Re. Mermaid Bones
5th Jan 2019 4:45pm
Thank you, Hunter. Much appreciated - happy it resonated with you. I believe in Mermen too! :D 🌊
Re. Mermaid Bones
9th Jan 2019 11:11pm
this is extremely humbling and beautiful my love.. as always,
though i must say now i have a different perspective on mermaids..
bravooo dear bravoo!
though i must say now i have a different perspective on mermaids..
bravooo dear bravoo!
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Re: Re. Mermaid Bones
10th Jan 2019 00:59am
I hope you recognize the strength of the mermaid within yourself, Howlings. Thank you; much appreciated.
Re. Mermaid Bones
22nd Jan 2019 5:30am
What I really like about this is that every word choice is unusual. We read or hear a lot about mermaids and the mythos is very prevalant in our consciousness thanks to the classical epics, but I was still surprised by the images and great vocabulary (sounds juvenile but some of these words I don’t see every day so it elevates this in its classical tone as well)
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Re: Re. Mermaid Bones
22nd Jan 2019 10:27am
Thank you, Muses. I feel there's a mermaid in all of us. Afterall, we are mostly water. This one actually won first place in a sci-fi competition recently. I was pretty surprised.
Re. Mermaid Bones
19th Sep 2020 6:47pm
I didn't know English could have so beautiful and varied strings of verbal expression. haha
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19th Sep 2020 7:12pm