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Wake Up!
Today the sky is filled with birds,
Tomorrow not a one is heard.
The oceans which once teemed with life,
Now filled with plastic and oil, running rife.
When the last fish is caught, the last bird is shot, the last tree is cut, will they notice then? When there's no clean water left for them? When there's no food to feed their kin? Only then will they notice, and by then, it will be too late.
Tomorrow not a one is heard.
The oceans which once teemed with life,
Now filled with plastic and oil, running rife.
When the last fish is caught, the last bird is shot, the last tree is cut, will they notice then? When there's no clean water left for them? When there's no food to feed their kin? Only then will they notice, and by then, it will be too late.
Author's Note
I left this poem as a comment on one of AndyJHale's poems, and he encouraged me to post it, so here it is! Check out this poem's unintentional inspiration here: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/332177-lynch-pin/
Other inspirations include my own pains about what humans are doing to our fragile planet. Oh, and Michael Jackson's, "Earth Song"!
Other inspirations include my own pains about what humans are doing to our fragile planet. Oh, and Michael Jackson's, "Earth Song"!
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2nd Jan 2019 11:54pm
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I think they may notice after the last tree is cut but maybe not, you know. It's strange how some of us don't give a shit about how we deal with our waste. It only takes a few to screw it all up too. Paul McCartney would like this one. He's an environmentalist too but we all need to be. But the question is, how far do or can we take it? Some of us drive cars & some of us use public transport. If we really want to be green, we should walk or cycle, skateboard or row, lol. ;-)
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3rd Jan 2019 1:41am
Thanks the insightful comment. Perhaps they notice, but what does it take to get people to care? It has to hit close to home. I try to do my part: fuel efficient cars, less meat, eating out less, and recycling, but there's always more we could be doing. I suppose that part of the poem was kind of bringing light to the fact that people will continue to ignore the fact that there's a problem until it's affecting their lives directly. Or until the problem is so extreme, it's too late to do much about it.
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3rd Jan 2019 1:57am
But even if it is, as a moral being, I can sleep more peacefully knowing that I tried. Even if my impact feels minimal at times...
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5th Jan 2019 11:23pm
So glad you posted it ... I am a nature loving too ... Mary Oliver is my favorite poet ...
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Re. Wake Up!
28th Apr 2020 4:39am
dearest NewB I love this your right your proverb
reminds me of the one in the song...
you're so right on with this write ❤
I think I found a soul brother in you...
reminds me of the one in the song...
you're so right on with this write ❤
I think I found a soul brother in you...
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