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Arisen Moon (Haiku)
You have felt that I -
the moon, is arisen,
here’s the tides!
the moon, is arisen,
here’s the tides!
Published 2nd Jan 2019
Author's Note
A Haiku for the competition New Year's Haiku.
My poetry/short story website: www.gothicsurrealism.com
My poetry/short story website: www.gothicsurrealism.com
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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2nd Jan 2019 12:47pm
2nd Jan 2019 12:49pm
Yeah I'm not happy with my Haikus. I'm doing these last minute before the competition closes. My first Haiku Tearcicicles I am happy with.
2nd Jan 2019 1:47pm
Surprisingly many people are ignorant about the moon's influence on the tides. This work has education value.
