Gogyoshi Poem Nr.01 — Colours Of Time

Awesome! Great interesting piece👏

Thank you Hunterpsych. And all the best for 2019 ...

Love the style and content, Josh.  Japanese forms have always been a favorite.  Their brevity usually coupled with exquisite art are breathtaking.  

I wish you'd start a comp for form.  It would truly be a learning experience for DUP.  

Hope you had a Happy Christmas and 2019 is blessed with an abundance of what matters most:  love, peace, and health.  

Thank you Ahavati - and all blessings for 2019.
I'm still considering a comp-series for form - but have a tendency to start things with great gusto and then fizzle out; I wouldn't want to do that so have to determine a pace I can maintain.  :))

I like it, Josh... lotta truth there... Ely

Thank you Ely - and all the best for 2019.  :))

gotta get over the flu... Brain not working too well...Ely

Me too flu - started just before Xmas, still slowly getting over it. Brain slowly re-activating.  :))

Quite thought provoking ... let's hope those colors make a reappearance ...

I hope so too; I'm, beginning to feel less and less at home in this world.  :))
Thank you for the read.

I'm not at all familiar with the gogyoshi form, but I love this.  The colors I remember from my past are Day-Glow, favored by the hippies.  About time their brightness returned.

Thanks for reading Crowfly.
A gogyoshi is simply a 5-line poem with no other demands
(in Japanese there is a requirement for an element of aesthetics and lyric, which don't really fit English language - see: gogyoshi.com)

Thank you Orenda for visiting, and commenting with enthusiasm. Glad you liked it. Josh.

Gogyoshi needs a title. Your Gogyoshi has no title.

Hello aizutaro. Thank you for commenting. And welcome to deepundergroundpoetry  
The title is "Colours of Time" ... but maybe I have not understood Gogyoshi poems. As the founder of world gogyoshi, maybe you can help and correct me? And congratulations on publishing the 5th anthology. Best regards, Josh.