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Alone (in a busy place)
Surrounded by hustle and bustle
I look about for a certain someone
although I know you're not here
Champagne corks popping
party goers in good cheer
Glasses clink, couples clinch
as they greet another year
Volume rising; a happy din
Meanwhile I blink back a tear
of disappointment you're not able
to celebrate our wonderful year
together, at my side, at this table
my constant companion I revere
our relationship without a 'label'
so warm and loving; that is clear
I feel alone amidst this rabble
unable to raise a glass and cheer
in the New Year without a cuddle
from the one I hold so dear.
I look about for a certain someone
although I know you're not here
Champagne corks popping
party goers in good cheer
Glasses clink, couples clinch
as they greet another year
Volume rising; a happy din
Meanwhile I blink back a tear
of disappointment you're not able
to celebrate our wonderful year
together, at my side, at this table
my constant companion I revere
our relationship without a 'label'
so warm and loving; that is clear
I feel alone amidst this rabble
unable to raise a glass and cheer
in the New Year without a cuddle
from the one I hold so dear.
Published 1st Jan 2019
Author's Note
When you need a certain someone
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1st Jan 2019 2:46pm
I feel this dearest David
you're bearing your soul here...
beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
you're bearing your soul here...
beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
1st Jan 2019 3:21pm
Thank you dearest Brenda, much as I celebrate the passing of the year and look forward to the new and it's challenges .I used my quiet time today to reflect on the fact that I am missing someone close to my heart right now.
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Jan 2019 12:45pm
1st Jan 2019 3:14pm
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I hear you sweet lady. Just the emotion of the New Year when you look for that special person you want to hold and they're not there. Damn I missed you. :(
1st Jan 2019 4:47pm
I was out last night with a friend commiserating the new year as his wife passed recently. I feel for you DR
1st Jan 2019 5:18pm
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1st Jan 2019 7:06pm
Oh David, I feel this with you so deeply.
2nd Jan 2019 2:04pm
Thank you Liah for your kind words. It is a feeling none of us truly relish experiencing. Dx
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jan 2019 2:45pm
2nd Jan 2019 11:51pm
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3rd Jan 2019 3:18pm
Thank you so much for the read and comments. I have been doing a fair amount of 'soul searching' in my recent writing as you may have read. :-)
Glad you are back (hugs) David xx
Glad you are back (hugs) David xx
5th Jan 2019 9:30pm
Creates vivid imagery in my mind, and a vivid expression of your feelings of loneliness. I enjoyed your poem, nice writing!
