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A Quiet Music

Our love is like "A Quiet Music"—
It is beautiful, sweet, and desirable.
It is tender, mystical and passionate.
It makes me feel like a walk in the first snow-
Where huge snowflakes fall freely all around you.
And you lift your face up to the sky and one gently
caresses your cheek and its touch makes you feel so
ALIVE!

Then there are times this love is so intense that
it takes everything I have to contain it.

Our love makes me feel like a walk in a giant meadow-
surrounded by a grove of evergreens.
And there are wildflowers swaying gently in the wind.
Your hair too, is blowing wildly about.
When all of a sudden I pick you up and twirl you
around and around.
We are smiling and laughing and I shout I love you!!!
And you shout I love you!!!
I look into your eyes and see such love.
Then I put you down and I look at you again,
and you look at me—
And we know that for now our love must
remain "A Quiet Music"
But the ending is so full of hope and has such
beautiful harmony that it brings with it a certainty
and a knowing that this love will remain everlasting
Greywolfman
Written by Greywolfman
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