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the apparatus bird
sinecure alliance, a
diabolic formation
stagnated shaky fronts
more or full of hunched backs
clattering with poached skulls
inner agora peeling midnight rigours
in a gyrating udukkai- a rudrathaandav
haunted poramboke’s unblinking scarecrows
in vigilante-veiled soggy landmine fixations
laze in the pitched pigmented night fabrics
in a blackened festering ooze, a self-deluge
embattling the quirky decembrist cumberlands
in a tap tap tap sharp stamped enjambments
- randomly scribbled scripts in an alluring gravitas
from the terribly torn & still tingling sanctum
in trancing subconscious submissions
to the surreal gloomy threads reeling
under the one, hungered hyperbole sun
imprinted momentarily deep on blank darkblue mats
are patterned metaphorical parallels in the revealing
a near-amphibian’s hyper combustive core
in an ashen haze of transcending altitudes
read fast read fast as you rise as you rise
with a sterling lightness of nothingness
shattered & burnt chambers aligning in
in an indecipherable vaporous fusion
emerges an ancient apparatus bird
birthed with an equipped baggage of mysterious appendages
mountainous ridged plumage in precise zen of a take-off stillness
its frozen black moons zoom over the buzzing base, a fertile chaos
a soothing warmth slowly embraces
from its crying camphoraceous heart
an over brimming riparian milk spring
feeds the infinite tiny suckling mouths
of its replicating self in such multitudes
instinctively unfurls to an umbrellaic cosmic blossom
stemmed with a thrumming bundled umbilical string
rootlets bore unto chanting wombs in the awakening
Published 29th Dec 2018
| Edited 30th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2018 12:09pm
Breathless! I have read this 10 times and will return. I salute you poetess. Rob.
29th Dec 2018 1:04pm
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29th Dec 2018 2:44pm
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29th Dec 2018 4:33pm
A stunning depiction to all age-old story of the Phoenix. An apparatus bird arises; the warmth emanating in the following stanzas was an absolute pleasure to experience, Uma.
It was as though Spring took flight and germinated every flower, tree, and human on the planet.
It was as though Spring took flight and germinated every flower, tree, and human on the planet.
29th Dec 2018 9:27pm
Instead of a comment...
So... Here... Now (at least, during it)... To proclaim no claims of
understanding, would be an understatement; am I, perhaps,
confused?... Not even close!... Confusion presupposes some kind of
pre-existing understanding of what is to be understood... So...
Here... Now... (Much later, that is)... I'm left grasping at some words
demanding of them to form a train thought - even if far away from
your meaning and clarity: Apparatus, sinecure, decembrists,
reproducing, expanding... So... Here... Now (before it all happened)
A seemingly complex structure of a gathering of theoriticians
plotting unsuccessfully their revolt in December, which finds its
meaningful application less than a hundred years later in the less
adverse weather conditions of October. (It is not mentioned, but
implied). A meaningful application, but a failure long term,
nonetheless. Reproduce and expand, often lead to self explode...
And just before it, sensing its relentless approach, crying 'wolf':
"read fast read fast as you rise as you rise", find the error in the script!
So... Here... Now... Outside parentheses... Your word poor relative...
So... Here... Now (at least, during it)... To proclaim no claims of
understanding, would be an understatement; am I, perhaps,
confused?... Not even close!... Confusion presupposes some kind of
pre-existing understanding of what is to be understood... So...
Here... Now... (Much later, that is)... I'm left grasping at some words
demanding of them to form a train thought - even if far away from
your meaning and clarity: Apparatus, sinecure, decembrists,
reproducing, expanding... So... Here... Now (before it all happened)
A seemingly complex structure of a gathering of theoriticians
plotting unsuccessfully their revolt in December, which finds its
meaningful application less than a hundred years later in the less
adverse weather conditions of October. (It is not mentioned, but
implied). A meaningful application, but a failure long term,
nonetheless. Reproduce and expand, often lead to self explode...
And just before it, sensing its relentless approach, crying 'wolf':
"read fast read fast as you rise as you rise", find the error in the script!
So... Here... Now... Outside parentheses... Your word poor relative...
30th Dec 2018 2:36pm
ah..the words! how they create & read & perceived..or uncreated unread & unperceived or the so much greys inbetween ;) that's why feels undone undefined defied almost ever. takis adored poet, my words are the depths scribbled .,a chaos..a patchwork of struggles n outbursts n dreams n hopes n watnot towards that's tried to be conveyed..in those so 'words' tat plays layered & lil cryptic from the juxtapositions i do. blame me, but that's the only way i flow..the metaphors n hyperboles n so. that i see makes a muchmore word-poorest me than wat you see yourself ..
master of simplistic words & sublime poetry like the rare you, i may not be ever perhap :) i still remember the bashing feedback i got one here when new & raw at du.. from deathproof ..but thanks to him actually. . it helped me in some way though was seriously taken aback. though the core me is still that adamantine .
i dunn know if i ev make sense at all dear one, but gratitude for being here & for such lengthy way of wat u felt. great 2019 to you x:)
master of simplistic words & sublime poetry like the rare you, i may not be ever perhap :) i still remember the bashing feedback i got one here when new & raw at du.. from deathproof ..but thanks to him actually. . it helped me in some way though was seriously taken aback. though the core me is still that adamantine .
i dunn know if i ev make sense at all dear one, but gratitude for being here & for such lengthy way of wat u felt. great 2019 to you x:)
30th Dec 2018 3:08pm
2nd Jan 2019 1:16am
Simply Speechless!! Your mind is the most beautiful maze of creation and I can only be in awe the beauty of your words, hauntingly exquisite and the imagery so magnificent. I can read this over and over and never get tire of it because its a work of art.
3rd Jan 2019 1:53am
