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Velvet Against Velvet
Unambiguously enacted and unfurling in her thoughts:
the narrative of her penchant
In a creamy white gossomer:
supple were her tenderly wanton
swells, buds of stone
In hues of red on lengthening flesh:
his silkened shaft, heavy were his jewels
In the alcove of her breasts,
the friction of velvet against velvet:
attentive to his every delicate ridge as he wished, there would she worship
The upsurge of his passions surrender raining down in warm spurts, landing where it may:
his searing lust branded upon her flesh
the narrative of her penchant
In a creamy white gossomer:
supple were her tenderly wanton
swells, buds of stone
In hues of red on lengthening flesh:
his silkened shaft, heavy were his jewels
In the alcove of her breasts,
the friction of velvet against velvet:
attentive to his every delicate ridge as he wished, there would she worship
The upsurge of his passions surrender raining down in warm spurts, landing where it may:
his searing lust branded upon her flesh
Published 29th Dec 2018
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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29th Dec 2018 8:53am
Beautiful description of making love to a woman's breasts. Favourite lines:
his silkened shaft - heavy were his jewels
In the alcove of her breasts,
the friction of velvet against velvet:
his silkened shaft - heavy were his jewels
In the alcove of her breasts,
the friction of velvet against velvet:
29th Dec 2018 10:54am
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29th Dec 2018 10:56am
Thank you dearest Greywolfman and especially so for the add!! Glad you enjoyed it!
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29th Dec 2018 2:13pm
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31st Dec 2018 2:12am
Thank you , Sky_dancer..that makes my heart happy as I aim for visuals
29th Dec 2018 3:55pm
This has the heat. A favoured fantasy of mine to be nestled in that alcove. You have stirred me well with this write.
31st Dec 2018 2:14am
If I had you stirred, it was very well worth the write!! Thanks so much for the add, it's an honor
29th Dec 2018 4:16pm
Thank you and if that's truth, then my heart is happy !! I'm humbled and gracious of your add
Brava Pandora! Superb, sensual description of an act that I've always wondered whether it's stimulating for the woman. Just the nestling in that sumptuous valley , that beautiful sensation of touch is a tingle maker extraordinaire.
31st Dec 2018 2:20am
Ah, thank you as I'm humbled by your add as well. Tbh, I was given the idea from another wanting it written. Considering I get the giggles, esp the facial effects and all, I thought how in the heck do I turn this act sensual?!? I'm very surprised at the reaction!
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31st Dec 2018 2:21am
Thank you Miss Velvet herself. I love seeing your avi btw, major Bettie love!
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