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Mankind isn't flawed
Mankind isn't flawed...
It's our way of thinking that is...
I'm poetOftragedy,
A man who saw failure before his attempt.
A man who hunger even when not hungry (greed).
A man who felt fear in place of love.
A man who gave in to doubt before his triumph.
A man who doesn't even know when his had enough.
But i too i'm just a man,
deep inside i know i'm no diffrent from you.
It's our way of thinking that is...
I'm poetOftragedy,
A man who saw failure before his attempt.
A man who hunger even when not hungry (greed).
A man who felt fear in place of love.
A man who gave in to doubt before his triumph.
A man who doesn't even know when his had enough.
But i too i'm just a man,
deep inside i know i'm no diffrent from you.
Published 26th Dec 2018
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26th Dec 2018 4:46am
Amen! Part of the evolutionary process of humans is to experience EVERY emotion and overcome the negative aspect of it. In the end and bottom line -- we are no different despite the strides we made; we have either been there and done that, or will have to face it and overcome.
Shame we can't be more supportive and see where those struggling with what we have for what it is -- albeit some make that very very difficult if they view you as a threat.
Good post poetOftragedy.
Shame we can't be more supportive and see where those struggling with what we have for what it is -- albeit some make that very very difficult if they view you as a threat.
Good post poetOftragedy.
27th Dec 2018 11:38am
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27th Dec 2018 11:40am
26th Dec 2018 2:03pm
dearest POT deeply insightful write
peering into your own humanity
and recognizing truths in yourself and in others...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
peering into your own humanity
and recognizing truths in yourself and in others...
beautiful...
love Brenda ❤
27th Dec 2018 11:35am
The best reference is the one you know,
So I had to refer to myself to best get the message through
Thank you Brenda
So I had to refer to myself to best get the message through
Thank you Brenda
27th Dec 2018 10:31pm
Very wise words, poetOftragedy. You're right about the thinking. It can be our weakness, whether we know it or not. You are, as you say,just a man, but one with a heart and honesty. Fine work my friend.
22nd Jan 2019 1:35am
