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Guardian Angel
There are some on earth who dwell
possessing an aura our fears to quell
Passing amongst us oft unseen
one in particular; quiet, serene
My shave and shower she does complete
dried and dressed; no easy feat
All during which we talk and tease
laugh and joke, always at ease
Her never ending love and care
unquestioning loyalty; always there
A mother, a daughter, a sister to some
to me a Guardian Angel bar none
Above reproach, surpassing any test
she is by far the best of the best
possessing an aura our fears to quell
Passing amongst us oft unseen
one in particular; quiet, serene
My shave and shower she does complete
dried and dressed; no easy feat
All during which we talk and tease
laugh and joke, always at ease
Her never ending love and care
unquestioning loyalty; always there
A mother, a daughter, a sister to some
to me a Guardian Angel bar none
Above reproach, surpassing any test
she is by far the best of the best
Published 25th Dec 2018
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25th Dec 2018 10:35am
25th Dec 2018 10:38am
Thank you and appreciate the read. I wish you all the best for the holidays. David x
25th Dec 2018 10:42am
good on you mate! and overdue recognition to the
best of the best indeed!!
applaud your thoughtfulness dear friend.
well delivered.
best of the best indeed!!
applaud your thoughtfulness dear friend.
well delivered.
26th Dec 2018 11:47am
Thank you for the read and kind comments. Everyone needs a GA in their lives. Happy holidays! David.
25th Dec 2018 12:18pm
so beautiful dearest David
perfect meter throughout...
she sounds very loving
and your time together tender bliss...
Merry Christmas...
love Brenda
perfect meter throughout...
she sounds very loving
and your time together tender bliss...
Merry Christmas...
love Brenda
26th Dec 2018 11:46am
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26th Dec 2018 11:53am
No, thank you for your kind words Helen. May you have a relaxing and peaceful Christmas. David x
25th Dec 2018 1:59pm
Great rhyming couplets and a brilliant homage to your guardian Angel. Hope you have a great Christmas.
Rob
Rob
26th Dec 2018 12:06pm
Thanks for the read and comments Rob. All the best to you and yours. David.
Anonymous
25th Dec 2018 5:34pm
This is lovely. I enjoy your descriptions of her.
26th Dec 2018 12:09pm
Thank you so much darling WP for your kind comments. She is truly a beautiful soul who has my respect and admiration. Have a lovely Christmas. David x
Anonymous
25th Dec 2018 6:50pm
So beautiful. Absolute admiration. Happy holidays sweet man.
26th Dec 2018 12:12pm
My dearest Liah, thank you for stopping by and commenting. May I wish you all the best this Christmas time. Much love & hugs. David x
28th Dec 2018 7:04am
28th Dec 2018 3:29pm
Many thanks for stopping by and your kind comments. Seasons greetings to you and yours. David
