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Glad Tidings
Sliced very slowly to the bone
His blood containing memories
For family scattered to the winds
Of friends that left him far behind
But still he dreams of better times
The innocence of younger days
The cynicism now removed
Reduced to little more than ash
He views the future with some faith
An angel on his left shoulder
She whispers in his waiting ear
"Merry Christmas, Happy New Year."
His blood containing memories
For family scattered to the winds
Of friends that left him far behind
But still he dreams of better times
The innocence of younger days
The cynicism now removed
Reduced to little more than ash
He views the future with some faith
An angel on his left shoulder
She whispers in his waiting ear
"Merry Christmas, Happy New Year."
Published 24th Dec 2018
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24th Dec 2018 10:57pm
Merry Christmas Sir Crow
I love this narrative
it's as if I've gotten a glimpse through your eyes...
beautiful...
love Brenda 💕
I love this narrative
it's as if I've gotten a glimpse through your eyes...
beautiful...
love Brenda 💕
24th Dec 2018 11:04pm
25th Dec 2018 3:13am
Merry Christmas, crow. To me, Christmas is all about dreaming of better times - those yet to come even more than those past. May this season find you full of hope. Cheers!
25th Dec 2018 11:55pm
I try for some faith and hope. Thank you for the eloquent view of what this day means to you.
25th Dec 2018 12:34pm
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25th Dec 2018 8:35pm
Hey Crow......this is stunning........beautiful vision of luv and hope. Merry Christmas my dear friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Dec 2018 00:27am
27th Dec 2018 7:28pm
Awe Crow.......humbly thanking you my dear friend and always inspiration to keep my head up......luv & hugs xo 💜🌸
Bravo Sir Crow! With children becoming adults I worried what my future Christmas may bring. I don't do lonely well...you've helped me to realize that it's a choice. You bring a glowing reality and hopeful perspective to the season. Merry Christmas Sir!
I'm so glad this inspired some hope, Gahdess. I doubt that a writer like you could be fully alone, now or in the future. We do have family and DUP. Thank you for the comment and RL entry!
26th Dec 2018 4:32pm
Sorry 'bout all the typos...I corrected my work 😀 Fat thumb, small keys don't ya know 😂
