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blue is the day
blue is the day
it colors my heart in shades of melancholy
its heart beats within me
stirring my pain
the ocean understands blue
it is the depths of passion
that ebb and pull within us
it has a mind of its own
the skies reflect this deity
residing in all living beings
blue is the face of us all
the great God over forlorn feelings
having nowhere to go
one day floated to the sky
a reminder you are never alone
you walk this path with fellow travelers
who know the depths of the blue like you do
as one we carry the varied hues of blue inside us
we are reminded to look to the oceans
as it carries our sadness out to sea
to look to the heavens
the skies are painted with our grief
then smile within ourselves
that we don't carry this heavy burden alone
Author's Note
for AEmelia's Blue Competition
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Re. blue is the day
20th Dec 2018 2:01pm
Re: Re. blue is the day
20th Dec 2018 2:02pm
thank you dearest Tim sending you hugs and good vibrations my friend...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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20th Dec 2018 3:03pm
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Re: Re. blue is the day
20th Dec 2018 3:10pm
thank you graciously dearest Bender for the love on this write... no we're never alone 💕
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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20th Dec 2018 3:07pm
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20th Dec 2018 3:11pm
Re. blue is the day
20th Dec 2018 5:49pm
Another amazing piece Brenda so good!👏👏
"the skies reflect this deity
residing in all living beings
blue is the face of us all"
Profoundly poetic love this message
Truly beautiful👏👏
"the skies reflect this deity
residing in all living beings
blue is the face of us all"
Profoundly poetic love this message
Truly beautiful👏👏
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Re: Re. blue is the day
21st Dec 2018 1:53pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for the love on this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. blue is the day
Anonymous
20th Dec 2018 6:09pm
Crimmy,
That's as deep as the blue ocean you speak of.
What a wonderful writer.
Love,
Matthew.
That's as deep as the blue ocean you speak of.
What a wonderful writer.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. blue is the day
21st Dec 2018 1:53pm
Re. blue is the day
20th Dec 2018 6:56pm
Re: Re. blue is the day
21st Dec 2018 1:54pm
thank you dearest Lawrence no wonder I was inspired to write Blue Energy for you...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
Re. blue is the day
20th Dec 2018 7:00pm
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21st Dec 2018 1:55pm
Re. blue is the day
20th Dec 2018 8:49pm
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21st Dec 2018 1:55pm
Re. blue is the day
20th Dec 2018 11:09pm
I won't sing the blues on this one, Brenda. Another write that touches my soul.
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Re: Re. blue is the day
21st Dec 2018 1:56pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow I'm so happy this one lifted your spirits...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
Re. blue is the day
Anonymous
21st Dec 2018 7:08am
Epic truths spilt here....Sin
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21st Dec 2018 1:57pm
Re. blue is the day
23rd Dec 2018 7:04pm
You imbue spirit into the color along the theme and I wouldn't doubt you will do well in this comp. All the best sweet Brenda. *hugs*
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