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HOOKED
Fear is why I came
Tradition is why I stay
Forgetting is not an option
Tenaciously dismayed
Foreknowledge of your truth
Treachery is not my way
Fundamentals of my creed
Talons embedded while you flayed
Tradition is why I stay
Forgetting is not an option
Tenaciously dismayed
Foreknowledge of your truth
Treachery is not my way
Fundamentals of my creed
Talons embedded while you flayed
Published 20th Dec 2018
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20th Dec 2018 8:42am
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21st Dec 2018 5:38am
I am going to take this piece further. I am thrilled it brought a grove to you.
21st Mar 2019 8:44am
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“Treachery is not my way
Fundamentals of my creed
Talons embedded while you flayed”
“Treachery is not my way
Fundamentals of my creed
Talons embedded while you flayed”
9th Apr 2019 9:05pm
I appreciate you and the kind comments you have given to what lines touched you in some way.
Anonymous
9th Apr 2019 5:28pm
That last line .... DDAAYYUUMM
9th Apr 2019 9:07pm
Anonymous
9th Apr 2019 9:35pm
Would a Viking Queen accept anything less than bold? I believe Not.
Thank you Lagertha
Thank you Lagertha
