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La Morenita
constellations envelope you
La Morenita
your feet upon the moon
Virgen María
winged angels carry thee
coal belt revealing
virginity and pregnancy
la Morenita
thy crown of stars
and downcast gaze
with hands intertwined
teach us your ways
glorified patroness
of bronzed flesh
who spoke the tongue of natives
a mother’s love you give
la Morenita
sought roses in winter
emblazoned on tilma
thy Aztec allure
queen of mestizos
who chose Juan Diego
thy grace bestowed
so the world may know
corona de las estrellas
the woman of revelation
born without flaws
mother of Mexican nation
in December on the twelfth day
with a procession of trumpets
we give homage to thee
Our Lady of Guadalupe
La Morenita
your feet upon the moon
Virgen María
winged angels carry thee
coal belt revealing
virginity and pregnancy
la Morenita
thy crown of stars
and downcast gaze
with hands intertwined
teach us your ways
glorified patroness
of bronzed flesh
who spoke the tongue of natives
a mother’s love you give
la Morenita
sought roses in winter
emblazoned on tilma
thy Aztec allure
queen of mestizos
who chose Juan Diego
thy grace bestowed
so the world may know
corona de las estrellas
the woman of revelation
born without flaws
mother of Mexican nation
in December on the twelfth day
with a procession of trumpets
we give homage to thee
Our Lady of Guadalupe
Published 20th Dec 2018
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20th Dec 2018 2:10pm
20th Dec 2018 8:14pm
You are kind, but it's rusty. I find poetry is not like riding a bike ... you take a break and your ability is half of what it was. Winter writer's block. :-) Hope you are having a nice holiday season
20th Dec 2018 8:20pm
While I see a few places where adjustments could be made ( I'm digesting ), it's still excellent poetry.
My holidays are quite lovely; hoping yours are the same. 🎄🎁
My holidays are quite lovely; hoping yours are the same. 🎄🎁
20th Dec 2018 5:02pm
Great writing!👏👏
"glorified patroness
of bronzed flesh
who spoke the tongue of natives
a mother’s love you give" wonderful lines!
I dig the flow and message👏👏
"glorified patroness
of bronzed flesh
who spoke the tongue of natives
a mother’s love you give" wonderful lines!
I dig the flow and message👏👏
21st Dec 2018 3:15am
Thank you for reading and taking the time to respond! It was very kind of you :-)
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20th Dec 2018 9:59pm
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21st Dec 2018 5:09am
Thank you for your feedback. Yes, I find a lot of the images are cliche as you noted (musicality or no, it is, as you correctly termed, "dated". It was an attempt at a very striking image that many know of either spiritually or artistically. It's big shoes to fill, haha.
I appreciate you taking the time to reflect and give insight.
-Muse
I appreciate you taking the time to reflect and give insight.
-Muse
