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Pale and intricate
delicate hues of
powder blues
then grey as a
Winter's day
Placid as a
Moonlit pool
Reflective
still and quiet
Spiritually
so deep
drawing me in
mesmerising
my soul
I am
complete
delicate hues of
powder blues
then grey as a
Winter's day
Placid as a
Moonlit pool
Reflective
still and quiet
Spiritually
so deep
drawing me in
mesmerising
my soul
I am
complete
Published 18th Dec 2018
| Edited 30th Dec 2018
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18th Dec 2018 4:18pm
so masterfully written
with so much passion and feeling
I get lost in your depths...
love Brenda 💕
with so much passion and feeling
I get lost in your depths...
love Brenda 💕
18th Dec 2018 6:39pm
Anonymous
18th Dec 2018 6:48pm
Beautiful! Simply beautiful!
18th Dec 2018 6:51pm
Anonymous
18th Dec 2018 6:52pm
I adore your work.
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Jan 2019 12:45pm
18th Dec 2018 11:40pm
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19th Dec 2018 10:34am
Dearest Helen, thank you for your read, RL inc' and commenting. My meagre attempts are my heart and soul in ink. David x
19th Dec 2018 10:08am
This poem is even more exquisite than the accompanying image. I like your writing very much DR :)
19th Dec 2018 10:21am
Thank you so much for your kind comments Velvet. I really appreciate your thoughts on my occasional outpourings. David x
