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On Poetic Forms, Nr.05 (Ottava Rimas: Theory & Practice)
OTTAVA RIMAS - THE THEORY
1.(a) The rhyming scheme is very clear
2.(b) three times a-b, a-b, a-b
3.(a) the final pair of lines change gear
4.(b) a rhyming couplet, -c- and -c-
5.(a) Ottava Rima was quite dear
6.(b) to lots of Byron’s poems; he
7.(c) for Don Juan would choose it well
8.(c) and Yeats too - as far as I can tell
(NB: Ottava Rima is a stanza form for longer poems)
OTTAVA RIMAS - THE PRACTICE
Car Chase
The get-away car races through the night
chased by cops, tyres squealing down the streets;
late-night shoppers stare gobsmacked at the sight
they see as the chased car easily beats
the lights which go red as cop-cars crash right
into a big truck - well, Hollywood treats
film-goers to adrenalin-packed scenes
munching pop-corn and upping dopamine.
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