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On Poetic Forms, Nr.05 (Ottava Rimas: Theory & Practice)

                    
OTTAVA RIMAS - THE THEORY                    
                     
1.(a)   The rhyming scheme is very clear           
2.(b)   three times a-b, a-b, a-b           
3.(a)   the final pair of lines change gear                 
4.(b)   a rhyming couplet, -c- and -c-              
5.(a)   Ottava Rima was quite dear               
6.(b)   to lots of Byron’s poems; he           
7.(c)   for Don Juan would choose it well         
8.(c)   and Yeats too - as far as I can tell             
                     
(NB: Ottava Rima is a stanza form for longer poems)                    
                     
                     
                     
OTTAVA RIMAS - THE PRACTICE                    
                     
Car Chase                    
                     
The get-away car races through the night                    
chased by cops, tyres squealing down the streets;                    
late-night shoppers stare gobsmacked at the sight                    
they see as the chased car easily beats                    
the lights which go red as cop-cars crash right                    
into a big truck - well, Hollywood treats                    
film-goers to adrenalin-packed scenes                    
munching pop-corn and upping dopamine.              
 
Written by Josh (Joshua Bond)
Published | Edited 21st Oct 2023
Author's Note
Number 5 in a series on Poetic Forms, including both Theory and Practice. The first poem uses the form itself to explain the 'Theory' of the form. The second poem uses the form as a random 'Practice' example. (On Poetic Forms 1, 2, 3 & 4, covered Quaterns, Limericks, Free Verse and Triolets).

On Poetic Forms, Nr.04 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/329771-on-triolets-2-triolets---theory/
On Poetic Forms, Nr.06 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/330519-on-luc-bats-theory-practice/
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