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Icy haiku

Icy breeze
freezes me in time
Never to melt.

Written by Hunterapsych

(Shaman among machines)

Published 12th Dec 2018

#haiku #nature #SelfReflection #wind

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Re. Icy haiku

12th Dec 2018 11:20am

Liked how you spun 'time' & ' never' abstracts to the icy theme.with a rhyme in there...feels the hardened unfeeling... well written haiku!

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12th Dec 2018 12:43pm

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment🙏 your kind words are very much appreciated🙏✌

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